The Ole Mill Wheel

The Mill wheel wouldn't turn until the Spring.
When winter’s ice stops up the water’s flow,
as small town folk expect, the Mill shuts down.
The Mill shuts down, yet people mill around.
Some weekend nights we'd see the miller’s son
and his young cronies heading down that road. 
It happened quite often and we guessed why;
but knowing wouldn't throttle tittle-tat.

Whispers ran through the town from door to door
and farther still they traveled phone to phone.
From where we talked, such weekend visits spoke
of poker, gambling, maybe beer and girls.
Such gossip served to freeze up logic’s course.
Such gossip thawed the warmer days of March;
electric poles appear around the site. 
Ice melts, revealing secrets - wheel creaks.

The secret is… they’ve modernized the mill
surprising us all who had run our tongues.
Its mighty wheel will creak now all year round,
all year round, just like the gossip mill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/28/2018 7:50:00 AM
Many congrats on your win. I really enjoyed. Elaine
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Date: 7/25/2018 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Creative, interesting. Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/24/2018 1:26:00 AM
Well done, Reason, congrats, and thanks for entering my contest. Viv
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 7/24/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Viv, for the contests (I love the 3-lline prompts) and I appreciate the honor of a placement here. Great lead-in to gossip which I hate.
Date: 7/18/2018 5:50:00 AM
Blank verse would be a challenge for me, because I do not understand what it is. I am glad it flows easily for you.
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Date: 7/24/2018 9:55:00 AM
Thanks, Caren, to each his own, I guess that's why we have so many forms. I usually like to rhyme but I take a challenge once ina while and blank verse was the option this time. I appreciate your comments always and welcome each one you write.
Date: 7/16/2018 1:43:00 PM
A very pleasant read.. a creative story flows with rhyhthm.
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Date: 7/24/2018 9:56:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay, that is a quality of blank verse - the iambic rhythm. One of Viv's line was not conducive; but a little variation never hurts in my book. Appreciate your time and effort making comments.
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