The Old Woman

I once knew a woman as old as the earth,
As frail as the wind, and as warm as the sun.
She taught me to remember that time has its worth.
Afraid if she didn't, like her, I’d have none.

Her hand was as frail as the breath of the wind
as she clung like a child to the fountain of life.
Her braid was her lifeline--so bare and so thinned,
Her claim to contentment, born without strife.

She must’ve been a dancer at an earlier point,
The way she dances through my heart, my soul, and my mind,
She wasn't scared to die, to disappear, or disappoint
Because she knew her heart and mine were intertwined.

Now she lives within me, an angel born of light.
She's as pure as redemption, simple and plain.
I miss her though I'm with her--she's my kryptonite.
Her mem’ry is the blood that runs through my veins.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Peck Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 9:49 AM
I just read your beautiful poem, so full of strength. Congratulations on your win!
Calasibetta Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Katie congratulations on your win! A touching tale you have told. Blessings, Paulette
Agustin Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 2:54 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Daniel Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 2:53 AM
Interesting, Katie, congratulations:)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Love it! Congratulations, Katie!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Lovely write. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina
Jones Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 9:50 AM
What a great storyteller you are. Love this. Congratulations on your win.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 9:04 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative rhyme story/write. Have a blessed autumn day writing away...................
Alex Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 5:38 AM
To have a human person as a loving one in our life and being possessed by him or her may be the best kryptonite. Congratulations!
Leffanta Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Nice flow and content! Enjoyed!
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