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The Old People and the School Brats

My wife and I proud of our luscious lawn,
Some mischievous children took a shortcut
Strode on the grass, each like an evil fawn,
We old couple could not the passage shut.

No doubt, we were thoroughly angry mad.
How dare these unruly brats spoil our grass?
For soon after school these young became bad, 
Their footprints left an ugly midway pass.

Could we elders change to enjoy our green?
We filled the path with tiles, planted flowers.
Surely the verdant lawn would now look clean, 
Bought a new bench where we could rest for hours.

The children grateful soon became our friends, 
They ran errands for us to make amends.


  The reference to my wife is fiction.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kiser Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 1:48 PM
Sometimes it takes a little patience. Well crafted penning.
Hawkins Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 12:31 AM
A little understanding goes a long way. The end was perfect.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 11:05 PM
It’s good that those children learned their lesson and came up trumps. A lovely read Victor… Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 12:50 PM
Enjoyed this very much! I love that a friendship was had between the old and young <3 Hugs ~ Kim
M  Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 3:01 AM
Ha….a happy tale written in a wonderful poem! Lovely Victor…..Cuddles….Debx
Romios Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 8:16 AM
Excellent form, and a wonderful story.. I felt I was really there. Your magical pen moves again . Thank you. Panagiota
Ricci Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 2:24 AM
Good Morning Victor. Hi. This is beautiful endearing enchanting and more. You create a beautiful vivid picture. Have a wonderful and peaceful day. Fill it will all things good as in your entry above. Love and Blessings now and always (smile)
Daniel Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 10:42 PM
Lovely story, Victor, win-win for both:)
Roper Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 9:48 PM
I like the ending. It is so easy to find a shortcut.. to get to where one is going.
George Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 8:20 PM
So, your act of paving the path with tiles and planting flowers on either side did wonderful things- made your lawn look brighter, made the children happier and turned your enemies into friends. See how some small changes in attitude brings wonderful changes. Your beautiful poem is an example.
Hawley Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 4:50 PM
That reads like a story. Is this something that happened to you?
Buehler Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 2:07 PM
The children learned a lesson and you were able to enjoy an enhanced view. A great story, Victor.
Kendrick Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 10:23 AM
Good idea about making a footpath to go where the students were walking. I hope you keep on enjoying them coming through your shortcut to their home. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Bell Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 9:33 AM
Children, just when you think you've got them trained, they grow up and bring their own children back.
Pandit Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 3:46 AM
They did reciprocate. Life is a wonderful exchange of give and take. Lovely example, Victor.
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 2:55 AM
- Times are changing...when I was a child we never went on the neighbor's property...today completely different...children are raised free - Nice that you became "friends" and the garden became beautiful again - A lovely poem, Victor - Have a nice day :)
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