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The Old Building

I had to turn back for a second look What beauty What grace What elegance What form Despite the faded exterior Despite the fallen plaster The old building charmed me! I strained to see more Wanting to memorize each feature Dreaming, wishing, hoping That I could one day... Explore it Posses it I ached that such a thing of beauty was Neglected Abandoned Ravaged by time By war By callous hands But wait..... Was that a light inside? A light! The house was inhabited A semblance of normalcy Shone out from the window Some poverty stricken soul Had found shelter In the abandoned In the enchanted Old building. There is a light Inside of me! Look hard... Look long... Can you see it? The exterior of my soul May not be beautiful Though there are faint reminders Of who I was Of who I am Look hard... Look long... Don’t grieve at havoc That time and experience And the rough hands of the world Have wrecked on me. Take a second look Look hard... Look long... That light is on It beckons you To come inside To explore To posses To take up residence In this abode of mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/25/2014 10:24:00 AM
Your beauty shines from both within and without and you possess an angelic voice, not to mention also an exquisite pen. I sometimes wonder how one who is so blessed can be filled with so much self doubt. Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/25/2014 10:31:00 AM
Your post bring healing, Richard. Thank you for seeing all that....Self doubt...yes, that does describe me. I sometimes brim with confidence and light up a room...at other times...I HIDE in my room. This is the complexity of me....Thanks for caring.
Date: 10/27/2012 9:14:00 PM
Eileen, your poem is deep, with the most inspiring image I've read today.. enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/27/2012 11:11:00 PM
Thanks ever so much! :) You brought a smile to face and joy to my heart! :) I appreciate your post!

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