The Old Building

I had to turn back for a second look
What beauty
What grace
What elegance
What form
Despite the faded exterior
Despite the fallen plaster
The old building charmed me!
 
I strained to see more
Wanting to memorize each feature
Dreaming, wishing, hoping
That I could one day...
Explore it
Posses it
I ached that such a thing of beauty was
Neglected
Abandoned
Ravaged by time
By war
By callous hands
 
But wait.....
Was that a light inside?
A light!
The house was inhabited
A semblance of normalcy
Shone out from the window
Some poverty stricken soul
Had found shelter
In the abandoned
In the enchanted
Old building.
 
There is a light
Inside of me!
Look hard...
Look long...
Can you see it?
The exterior of my soul
May not be beautiful
Though there are faint reminders
Of who I was
Of who I am
Look hard...
Look long...
Don’t grieve at havoc
That time and experience
And the rough hands of the world
Have wrecked on me.
 
Take a second look
Look hard...
Look long...
That light is on
It beckons you
To come inside
To explore                           
To posses
To take up residence
In this abode of mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 10:24 AM
Your beauty shines from both within and without and you possess an angelic voice, not to mention also an exquisite pen. I sometimes wonder how one who is so blessed can be filled with so much self doubt. Hugs Rick.
Manassian Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 10:31 AM
Your post bring healing, Richard. Thank you for seeing all that....Self doubt...yes, that does describe me. I sometimes brim with confidence and light up a room...at other times...I HIDE in my room. This is the complexity of me....Thanks for caring.
A   Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 9:14 PM
Eileen, your poem is deep, with the most inspiring image I've read today.. enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD
Manassian Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 11:11 PM
Thanks ever so much! :) You brought a smile to face and joy to my heart! :) I appreciate your post!
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