The Old Brooch

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Once upon a time, I was created by an 18th century jeweler,
but I do not remember his name because of course I am very old;
          for a while, I lay on a satin cushion in a high style store,
although just made of glass and silver, I was still quite expensive.

     Then, one bright day a nice gentlemen came in to buy a gift,
he explained to the clerk it was a birthday present for his new wife;
          he was shown many pieces until they came to me,
and he exclaimed, oh yes, this is perfect, I will take it, please.

     His wife adored me, oh I love the flowers in sparkling glass,
of pink and diamonds, I am going to put it on my new hat;
          and there I stayed for years and years till she at last died,
I lay on a closet shelve gathering dust until her daughter found me.

     She cleaned me gently and pinned me to her wool jacket,
and I got tons of compliments when we went out shopping together;
      she never forgot me and touched me often with great love,
then, she died suddenly . . .  and I was given to a charity store.

     It was a terrible place, and I just lingered there sad and alone,
until a girl with raven hair picked me up and said oh how pretty;
          she took me home-   now I live on her dresser . . . . loved.

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April 13, 2018


Poetry/Personification/The Old Brooch
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1012-723-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Bring To Life
sponsor, Shadow Hamilton

Fourth Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/16/2018 12:29:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Constance - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"
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Date: 4/15/2018 5:18:00 PM
Lovely, as usual, Constance. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/15/2018 12:33:00 PM
Lovely, BW. Beautiful and charming. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 4/15/2018 12:19:00 PM
A beautiful story! Great imagery and intrigue. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/15/2018 9:41:00 AM
Such a beautiful heart-felt story, as only you can tell, dear Constance. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 4/14/2018 9:38:00 PM
Congratulations, Constance on your win. A touching personfication on a beautiful object
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Date: 4/14/2018 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings, well deserved win! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 4/14/2018 6:24:00 PM
I love poems like this. It's fun to imagine life in inanimate objects!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2018 6:46:00 PM
Sunlite, thank you. Personification is one of my favorite forms ~
Date: 4/13/2018 3:08:00 PM
what a wonderful tale bringing the jewel to life and knowing your love of vintage items I suspect that raven haired girl was you Constance:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2018 4:57:00 PM
Jan, thank you. Yes, you know how much I love vintage jewelry, and I am indeed that raven haired girl who is always on the look out for a unique piece to love ~
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