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The Ocean

I love the rise of the ocean the hidden secrets of it's life the highs and lows of the tides the music as they crash The silent mingle of the tide upon it's shore and the disappearance of millions of sand granules recycled back into it's depth dark blue rolls out as fast as it rolls in it doesn't stop on a dime life it takes into it's watery grave life it gives to every creature within its grasp

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Date: 9/18/2023 6:29:00 AM
Those last two lines really stood out for me, and the flow of your poem truly is beautiful. Absolutely stunning oceanic write, thank you for writing. Congratulations
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Date: 9/15/2023 11:13:00 AM
Very nice! Love the ending.
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Date: 9/14/2023 4:54:00 PM
I love your ocean, Karen, you are a friend to the ocean, I think. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 9/13/2023 10:34:00 AM
A moment spent on waters edge, visually creative! Nicely done Karen!
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