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The Oak Tree

A gnarled lone oak tree grew in the middle of voluminous nowhere, amidst vast stretches of citron corm fields, a by-product of an old man’s weird whim. It proved quite a memorable playground, For when I was small it was pure delight. Oh how I loved to climb up towards an azure sky feeling for sturdy branches, imbibing the smell of fresh-grown leaves. At times I would listen to the wayward wind, as it moaned in isolation amidst lush green branches. Yet when storms struck I shied away as the winds howled and thunder rumbled around the top twigs of my old oak tree. The last time I was there I was not alone. Handsome was tagging along. He was not interested in the old oak tree That's when I began to hate him. And just to prove my point a sudden change of weather and heavy rain fell hard. We ran to the car but the doors stuck. To shelter under the tree was dangerous. Lightening zigzagged above. The place became cursed. Finally Handsome opened the car and we sped away. I never met Handsome nor visited the oak again.

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Date: 6/25/2023 12:52:00 PM
This was captivating, I had no idea of what might happen in the end; good thing you got away; though I'd probably have gone back again. Enjoyed.
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Date: 6/14/2023 7:03:00 AM
Intriguing write Victor...a bit of truth, fantasy, whimsy, and caricature all in one. I like it. :)
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Date: 6/11/2023 10:51:00 AM
This one leaves us wondering who is Handsome. I thought at first he was your dog but then you said you began to hate him because he wasn't interested in the oak tree. So he couldn't be your dog. So who was he? Perhaps Handsome was an attitude you brought with you that you shed at the oak tree. A fine write as always Victor. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/10/2023 1:20:00 PM
I loved the poem, the oak trees always leave me nostalgic, they live so long, often generations remember the same old oak in the middle of a field. Your ending was mysterious, who is Handsome? A ghost? It feels like a riddle, but I cannot fathom what the answer would be to it :) It's a great poem, that is for certain!
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Date: 6/10/2023 12:29:00 PM
Such a strange one how you had Handsome in there but good thing he would be dropped. But why the tree?
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Date: 6/9/2023 4:18:00 AM
Coming home after days away to read your lovely poem was a delight Victor. You are as artistic as a master that uses paints and a brush to create a picture.
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Date: 6/7/2023 11:05:00 PM
A beautifully written account of an old tree as the central image. So many sweet memories are curled around it."Oh how I loved to climb up/ towards an azure sky/ feeling for sturdy branches,"..... This brings vivid pictures into my mind. Lovely poem.
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Date: 6/7/2023 11:17:00 AM
With an unparalleled ability to transport readers directly into the heart of the narrative, you have masterfully crafted a tale that leaves us breathless. Your artistry in storytelling is truly remarkable, and we are grateful for the privilege of experiencing it. Your story is a masterpiece, skillfully woven with a clever twist that leaves us in awe. Thank you for sharing your gift.
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Date: 6/7/2023 10:45:00 AM
Captivating tale. It is admirably written, and the ending does not disappoint. :)
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Date: 6/7/2023 8:34:00 AM
Quite an interesting story told in poetic form. Thanks for sharing it today and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 6/7/2023 6:51:00 AM
Such intense imagery, a gripping tale indeed Victor, hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/7/2023 5:43:00 AM
Great imagery! A child’s playground but alas danger exists in the form of a storm and the antagonist “Handsome.”
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Date: 6/7/2023 5:14:00 AM
Intriguing story, Victor. Some events leave a lasting mark.
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Date: 6/7/2023 3:06:00 AM
Good Afternoon Victor. Hi. Yes, you truly know how to tell a story that has a reader in the scene looking on. Truly. Thank you for sharing. May today be a day with all things good. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile)
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Date: 6/7/2023 1:37:00 AM
- A story wonderfully told with a twist at the end...love it - I loved climbing trees as a child, even though my mother always said "only boys climbed trees" - Have a great day, Victor :) - hugs
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