The New Church

Wanting to further glorify heaven
by reaching up to its lofty, great height,
the Romanesque arch was changed with leaven
in mind to further complete a great sight.

Taking away the strength of the curved arch
she could quickly cave under the pressure;
her nave losing form from having gone parch,
stones burying its cargo of treasure.

Finally the pointed arch came to life:
keystone replaced by rib and groin vaulting,
buttresses outside the nave side by side,
all safe inside, pressure at last halting.

The cathedral taller, bringing more light.
A reconfigured symbol of her might.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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George   Avatar
February 5, 2009 at 2:49 AM
This reminds me of the building of the church in the book 'Pillars of Earth'. Well done! and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, dear Kristina. Love and peace, lainie
Richards Avatar
January 31, 2009 at 5:42 PM
Well done, and amazing imagery! Well deserving to be among the winning poems! Congratulations Kristina!! ~ Love, Carrie
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January 30, 2009 at 3:42 PM
Dear Kristina - Congratulations on your WIN in Brian's contest! Peace always, John
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January 30, 2009 at 1:14 PM
The creative imagery makes for interesting reading. Nice use of this challening form. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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January 30, 2009 at 6:09 AM
This is a lovely sonnet, Kritina. I'm sorry to have missed it earlier. Congratulations on your win in Brians contest. Love, Robin
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January 30, 2009 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations Kristina on your win in Brian's contest! Beautiful Sonnet! Love, Shar
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January 30, 2009 at 1:29 AM
Congrats on your success in my sonnet contest Kristina.Rgds Brian
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January 28, 2009 at 11:41 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Kristina.Rgds Brian
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