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If the meal ain't to your liking don't shovel it in with both hands.

The Nag

Your conversation centers 'round,
Complaints of one kind or another.
I swear sometimes I think for sure,
You're someone's sainted mother.;

Or someone's maiden aunt, per chance,
Come back from the dead,
To punish me for all my sins,
And fill my life with dread.

You need me though, you know you do.
Without me who would listen,
To all the things you have to say,
All your pearls of wisdom.

You gripe about the world at large,
Politics, law, religion;
It seems to me that no one's safe,
From critical inspection.

You pick at me from morn to night,
About my faults and screw ups.
I'll never change, you know I won't,
So why don't you just shut up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Callus Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 8:35 AM
Hi Judy...I don't know why usually women carry the 'nag' label, while some men can be equally 'naggy'. I suppose we eventually learn to live with a 'nag'! ~ Regards // paul
Babcock Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 3:13 PM
Made me chuckle. Just tell the nag to get off your back. lol. Just getting better been down with the same flu I had last year. Went for antibiotics fast so hope it will shorten the duration. So nice to hear from you. love phyl
Ball Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 1:00 AM
Thanks so much Phyl. Glad you like it and it's great to hear from you again. Sure hope you are better by now. Been fighting stomach flu myself lately. God Bless, JB
James Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 1:40 AM
aaaah loved it!
Ball Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Thank you so much James. Glad you enjoyed it. God Bless, JB
Lamoureux Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:28 AM
This made me smile. Consider "who's comeback from the dead." It will fit better with your rythem in the rest of the piece.
Ball Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 6:40 PM
Thanks so much Richard. Glad you liked it and thanks for the suggestion. God Bless, JB
May Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:43 AM
lol..Very nicely penned Judy...
Ball Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 6:37 PM
Thanks so much Joseph. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
Smith Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Sounds like Sister Mary Rose with a ruler in her hand...thanks for the reminder Judy
Ball Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 6:28 PM
Actually it's my husband but he acts like an old woman. He never smiles. Thanks bunches my friend.Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
Turner Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 8:06 PM
very funnt, Mrs Judy:) Thanks for the laugh:)
Ball Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Thanks so much Daniel. Glad you enjoyed it. God Bless, JB
Wolf Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Haha, I can so relate to this, Judy. We were brought up, if you have nothing good to say, say nothing at all!
Ball Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 6:39 PM
That's what my mom used to say when we were kids. Thanks bunches White Wolf. God Bless, JB
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