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The Music Still Plays

I was a youth who seldom thought about the fact that in the midst of life I was, with each breath, getting closer to its end. I viewed life as a beautiful clear stream that never would run dry, eternal spring, and lively music written for the young. ************************** That same stream flows, but not so deep as then. I’m thirsty still, but sometimes just a sip is all it takes to make me smile. My spring is gone, my summer too; but autumn holds unique appeal. I’m grateful for each breath. Though sometimes thoughts of dying try to quell my joy, the music in my soul still plays. November 29, 2020 entered in Brian Strand's UN-RHY-ME Contest Placed 1st

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Date: 11/22/2021 12:29:00 PM
Hi Janice. What lovely blank verse. Seldom on soup do we find this form presented as well as you have done. And the feelings you express I now know well. Best wishes. Tony
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Date: 12/29/2020 1:53:00 PM
Janice, Sweet music in Blank verse - "I’m thirsty still, but sometimes just a sip is all it takes to make me smile." Your seasons in life. Summer was always overrated. Left so many thirsty 'til the cool rains came in Autumn. -Richard
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/20/2021 2:25:00 PM
Richard, thank you so much. Janice
Date: 12/29/2020 8:29:00 AM
Wow! This is exactly how it goes as we grow old. A fav for me, dear Janice.~ Elaine
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/29/2020 8:32:00 AM
Thanks a million, Elaine! Janice
Date: 12/2/2020 2:01:00 PM
Janice, your golden pen is telepathic as this amazing poem reveals my life, and reads my thoughts and feelings. Such an inspiring and intuitive piece beautifully expressed with lovely rhythmic grace. A fav! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian’s contest.. ~Susan
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/2/2020 2:25:00 PM
Susan, your kind words have made my day. Bless you! Janice
Date: 12/1/2020 2:15:00 AM
A lovely poem Janice. Time is the most valuable thing anyone can spend. Your words reminded me of the poem Time's Paces about the apparent speeding up of time as one gets older. Cheers - Gary
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/1/2020 6:17:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gary. Janice
Date: 11/30/2020 7:57:00 AM
I hope the music of your souls plays for years and years to come... I think many will relate to your poem..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/30/2020 8:12:00 AM
What a lovely comment, S.O. THANK YOU! Janice
Date: 11/30/2020 6:18:00 AM
This is such a thoughtful commentary on how life progresses, Janice--awesome transition from the first stanza to the second stanza. Feels so honest and elegant!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/30/2020 6:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay. Janice

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