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The Mothership

and all pointed agog, eyes, the city in the sky this towering colossus held up by ecru clouds ensemble reaching disbelief itself. . . jacketed in jolted hearts staring from below, that hum a silence, tore, of what mankind deeply knew

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Date: 11/12/2023 8:09:00 AM
I love the mystery and eerieness you created with this poem. 'Towering colossus held by ecru clouds' was an eloquent image. Always your last lines are subtle, hinting at a bigger picture. I love that ability of yours. Have a pleasant Sunday, Sara
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/12/2023 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Sara, your words have made my day

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