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The moments before a nice day

Spin the plates, spin the plates, spin the plates If anything hits the fan... No Spin the plates, spin the plates, spin the plates It will all fall down... No Breathe. No. Yes.... One step at a time (into oblivion) Further in, further in, further in I will rattle this breath into my lungs if it kills me (That's the spirit) Just take a step, a step, a step Momentum, cling to it. The end/beginning/middle

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Lin Lane

Date: 5/1/2025 3:49:00 AM

One step forward and two steps back? I can only breathe easy about this one because of the title. Stuck in the middle with you. That's the second song you've led me to today, Dilly.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/1/2025 8:10:00 AM

Haha yeah I all panned out just fine Lin, I just find it interesting to time capsule a moment sometimes and then reflect on it later. We are all usually a lot stronger than we give ourselves credit for. Thanks for bringing the party to this one with the song :)