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The Mirror of My Life

I have mirrored the whole of my life On this mercurial surface I have painted myself on this glossy canvas My pen has bled words in red You can look straight into me As you see my reflection on a mirror I have sketched me as I am Honest and truthful, Sans distortion or contortion I don’t want to be a sham Here have I laid bare my life Fraught with aches, dotted with smiles My longings and my heart aches My expectations, my disappointments My triumphs, my defeats My search through every nook n’ cranny for success My plunge into the nadir of despair on defeat My moments of escalating joy My dark hours of crippling distress Everything I wanted to be Everything I failed to be Please have a peek into my porous heart Assess this candid chronicle of my life And tell me if my soul is black or white Sometimes I feel I am a life boat without oars Floating aimless hither and tither But I see light houses of joy in between To pilot my way over shoals and breakers! May. 5.2022 Placed Third In the Mirror of Life Poetry Contest Sponsor- Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Sotto Poet

Date: 5/13/2022 4:42:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on the well-deserved victory you've achieved. Valsa, you penned such a magnificent poem. Blessings

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/5/2022 11:43:00 PM

We are all people, with ups n downs. You are beautiful Valsa,your pen is amazing. You lift my spirits often. Beautiful poem <3

Anil Deo

Date: 5/5/2022 7:54:00 PM

If you had Jesus, nothing else ( that's impossible,but just 4 argument) YOU WOULD BE A GREATER SUCCESS than BILLIONS. But Valsa George has words, education, Family, and INDiA, too. No one born in India is spiritually poor. That, too. Can stand one in good stead. ThanX for a three way mirror. Shalom shalom Sis

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/5/2022 7:09:00 PM

A revealing look into a searching mirror here.

Bill Baker

Date: 5/5/2022 3:02:00 PM

You cannot feel the bliss of finding Truth and Love without the feelings of being lost as you seek direction. Even the greatest person to ever walk the face of this earth, Jesus, felt both the bliss and the doubt of what path to follow. I admire your beautiful and mindful poetry, Valsa. This was another example of fine poetry. Great entry for the contest, good luck! Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/5/2022 6:08:00 AM

Wonderful Valsa. If you are to self portrait, the honesty is essential.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/5/2022 4:35:00 AM

Valsa, the reflector of your life speaks powerfully to you through its projections. Your writing elicits powerful feelings and has a significant influence on me. You performed admirably in the contest and I wish you the best of luck.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/5/2022 4:27:00 AM

The mirror of your life projects eloquently for you my friend. I feel the emotions and impact of your write. Best to you, Valsa.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/5/2022 12:35:00 AM

Definitely white Valsa, you rose well to the challenge for the contest, best of luck. Tom

Valsa George
Date: 5/5/2022 2:08:00 AM

Thanks a lot Tom for giving me a clean certificate and affirming that my soul is white. :) :)