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The Miraculous

On a night last month 
a full moon rose above
the city skyline across the bay
and sent its light to dance 
on the water around my feet.
It had traveled a long way
to reach me and seemed as if
it was infused with the miraculous. 
I bent down and scooped up 
a little of the light.
It felt alive, trembling 
in the cupped palm of my hand,
so fragile in the gravity
of this angry world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Lane Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 2:27 PM
These thoughts of your always capture the details of what most don't notice, much less give credit to them for just 'being.' It's what I once told you, Paul... you expose the light, and not just the one in this poem to many of us who are blind to the things we should treat with awe.
Willason Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 4:47 AM
Absolutely treasure your comments dear Lin...sorry for the delay in thanking you. Your words do me a great honor.. I feel reluctant at times to step into but accept humbly with gratitude. Deeply appreciated.
Rodgers Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 7:13 AM
Hey Paul! Your poem captures that magical moment under the full moon perfectly! I love how you describe the light as something alive and fragile. It really makes me feel the contrast between beauty and the chaos of the world. Keep sharing those beautiful moments! Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Willason Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 4:41 AM
Always take delight in your thoughtful comments Daniel...sorry for long pause in acknowledging. Value your support...returned blessings my friend.
M  Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 2:23 AM
Paul you are such an amazing poet... what an incredible poem and perfect photo! Your words just grab my heart and take me away honestly!! Another enjoyable Paul journey!! Ha.....Debx
Willason Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 4:39 AM
Oh dear...I'm likely to bathe long in these words my dear Deb...thankyou for your ongoing support and encouragement. Matters to me...yake care, Paul
Wakeling Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 2:21 AM
This was quite pleasant to read. A very poetic story. Well done
Willason Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 4:36 AM
Many thanks David for your kind words, appreciated. Regards, Paul
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