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"I follow the Moskva and down to Gorky Park- listening to the winds of change" - Scorpions All the heads of state and their spouses (or significant others) have arrived and been seated for this, my last show at Gorky Park, here in the heart of Moscow. For twenty odd years our troupe has staged this re-enactment of medieval entertainment for Russia's elite and I, I have been its star performer. Patiently, I bide my time as each actor does his schtick to the amusement of the crowd, enjoying their moment in the spotlight under grey skies and bitter cold temperatures. Before long, those in attendance are calling me to the platform with the chant: "MINSTREL OF MOSCOW! MINSTREL OF MOSCOW"! Yes, my reputation for thrilling an audience precedes me. As I step onto the stage in my flaming red tunic and mitered felt hat (with lute in tow), a strange feeling suddenly envelops me, a suffocating and all-pervasive wave of anxiety. I have to say, in all my years of entertaining never once has this gut-punch of trepidation to perform happened to me. I gaze out at this assembly of powerful people, each one eager to hear my lyrical poetry set to music. Lyrics of battle and victory, power and conquest, humor and loss. Just as I am trying to regain my composure, a stiff breeze in the form of a vortex sweeps through the park, sending leaves and debris flying through the air and upsetting the peaceful dynamic that has held sway up to this moment. My anxiety gradually dissipates and is being replaced by, well, I can only describe it as a presence, or a power. I am experiencing a newfound clarity, a singular purpose. I think I understand what is being asked of me. The words of a dirge have come into my head without my consent. My fingers begin to strum an unfamiliar, foreboding melody: "Have you come here to be entertained, O King of the North? Are you not the same one from of old, Gog of the land of Magog? For a brief moment in time, you felt anxious over an unexpected whirlwind. There are days coming, O king, when my whirlwind will become a cyclone of destruction such as has never been witnessed by mankind. You have invaded and conquered. You have pillaged and ravaged. My own people you treat with contempt and dishonor. You have been examined and judged. The innocents cry out to me day and night. Shall I not avenge them? On this day take note, O Gog, along with your cohorts in crime, that vengeance is mine, I shall repay. Your days have been cut short and brought to a conclusion. Your annihilation is imminent." Returning to my senses, I can see that all faces in the crowd have become whitewashed and stony. Even my loyal band of brothers appear stunned at the gravity and tone of my song. There is no applause, as one by one each of the condemned exits the park. One thing I know for certain, my life will never again be the same. grey skies soon depart as light overcomes darkness the endgame in sight  

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Date: 3/14/2024 8:40:00 PM
Great storytelling Tom, judgement will come in due time, cry peace and security first, then, they need to pay!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/15/2024 5:11:00 AM
There's Johnny. Quite a few been missing you. Good to see you're ok. Yes, the king of the North, along with the rest, have been put on notice
Date: 3/12/2024 8:18:00 AM
It seems poverty implies innocence and riches implies guilt to put it into simple terms. Gone are the classics of art in today's world in exchange for animation, coarse language, sound effects, and political nonsense and gibberish hype. Great story-telling Tom, enjoyed the read.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/12/2024 9:07:00 AM
Much thx for visit Dennis
Date: 2/17/2024 8:05:00 AM
Good one. I like it's faith and Biblical innotations. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Your visit was uplifting. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/20/2024 4:42:00 PM
Yes'm and thx
Date: 2/11/2024 6:12:00 AM
Gosh, what a profound and powerful haibun this is, dear Tom!! You've absolutely nailed the art of intense storytelling here, conveying the feeling within every fleeting moment that the main protagonist must have felt.. That ending turned really unexpected and so soul-hitting.. Honestly, I haven't seen anyone like you, who writes haibun with such enormous talent.. It's truly your ruling genre! In this story, what needed to be said was said, by the Minstrel "my life will never again be the same."
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/11/2024 9:27:00 AM
Thanks dear Hiya
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 2/11/2024 6:13:00 AM
Absolutely impeccable and that haiku is brilliant as well. Keep writing and shining always. Sending many best wishes to you!
Date: 2/11/2024 1:48:00 AM
Love both the story and the narration, Tom. I enjoyed the flow of confidence, turned anxiety, turned clarity. As always, your poem leaves me wondering, amid digestion.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/11/2024 5:40:00 AM
Grateful Robert
Date: 2/10/2024 2:53:00 PM
I really like your style of poetry Tom. It's narrative, engaging and educative. Nice one, happy new year.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/11/2024 5:41:00 AM
Hello Tonye. Have a wonderful weekend
Date: 2/10/2024 11:29:00 AM
Your haibun is a creative exploration of themes such as power, responsibility, and the pursuit of justice. It invites readers to reflect on the consequences of our actions and the potential for redemption in the face of adversity. Through its vivid imagery and evocative language, it leaves a lasting impression long after the final words have been spoken... great storytelling T
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/11/2024 5:41:00 AM
Much thx big guy
Date: 2/10/2024 9:36:00 AM
Your poetry is always like a deep revelation that one can only understand by taking it in piece by piece, this is brilliant Tom, thanks for sharing your talent and your time. :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/11/2024 5:40:00 AM
Much thx Rose. I've been thinking of posting something a bit lighter next time
Date: 2/9/2024 7:12:00 PM
A captivating read that gets to the heart of the matter. Many might see the black cloud rolling in, but powerless to stop it. I hope and trust that your final haiku turns out to be prophetic, as the uncertainty is wearing most people down, Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/10/2024 4:51:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comment
Date: 2/8/2024 2:47:00 PM
hmm i've been to moscow, in the kremlin..as always, this form best becomes your writing - i like the closing haiku
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/8/2024 2:57:00 PM
I know prophetic judgments aren't your faves so I appreciate the stop even more
Date: 2/7/2024 11:47:00 PM
Yet who is the northern king.? Could it be Putin.?? I'm not all in on it I don't think he's A stupid man?? I think someone will take Over the army he has built..Tyoical satanic Action entering by 'a side door' but if man Did not make war??????????????????????
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/8/2024 5:26:00 AM
Russia and her allies make up the king of the North. Thx for visit joe
Date: 2/7/2024 7:54:00 AM
Beautiful. Loved darkness yielding to light. Wonderful narration.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/7/2024 9:42:00 AM
Appreciate the visit
Date: 2/7/2024 6:15:00 AM
(I took a screenshot...) :)))
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/7/2024 6:29:00 AM
The king of the North has been put on notice, through the books of Daniel, Ezekiel, Revelation etal. The chariot moves forward
Date: 2/7/2024 6:12:00 AM
Aah, here I hear the younger brother of the Sons of Thunder... Purely outspoken, Tom! And John, the one Jesus felt so much affection for, was considered so dangerous by the Roman Empire, because of his zeal, that he was exiled to the isle of Patmos. Yet that is where he wrote, under inspiration, the book of Revelation. Yes indeed, the light shines in this darkened world, through the enlightenment we have received. Spoken with your whole heart! I can hear it...Warm Regards (the captcha is JW!)
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Date: 2/6/2024 9:20:00 PM
One thing I know for certain: your life will never again be the same. Not unthinkable considering the era where ballads and minstrels reigned. That being said, I enjoyed the whole story and the courage of the Minstrel to get the message across. God be with him. As always, a truly great Haibun Tommy...Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/7/2024 6:03:00 AM
Thx for visit and support Maria
Date: 2/6/2024 12:46:00 PM
Anointed art has a power we do not understand but it changes us first then those who imbibe in its mystery! Your storytelling is gifted, Tom. Blessings to you!
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/6/2024 1:23:00 PM
I knew you would understand this one. Thx for visit Sam
Date: 2/6/2024 10:13:00 AM
Tom, your poem is truly magnificent! It exudes an incredible intensity through its foreboding melody. The way you deliver it is nothing short of powerful. My friend, you have truly excelled. Thanks for your comment on my page.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/6/2024 1:23:00 PM
Appreciated much sotto
Date: 2/6/2024 7:24:00 AM
This is truly amazing. Just love it, all of it, the story, the beginning and the end. All of it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/6/2024 1:24:00 PM
Being a spiritual person yourself I thought you might. Thx Gina
Date: 2/6/2024 5:41:00 AM
This is a powerful poem, i love what you did here, before i begin commenting on the haibun, i must highlight song lyrics quoted above. And back to this, as entertainers and performers, they must feel all these sort of things when performing for elites or what we can call the ignorants that mistreat the innocent souls, and what they need is much more than a tune or two but exactly the powerful melody here sung here, when one sings of truth, nobody likes it.Powerful! Soul hitting. Pleasure readn
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/6/2024 5:48:00 AM
Thx for visit. Judgment messages have never been popular, but must be proclaimed against the guilty ones. Enjoy your week, hopefully migraine-free
Date: 2/5/2024 5:46:00 PM
As always, a master storyteller! The foreboding melody executed perfectly... I love the way you weaved the scorpions line into this and built your tale around it.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/5/2024 5:55:00 PM
So good to see you Su. I really hope you start posting here and becoming active. Thx much pal
Date: 2/5/2024 8:46:00 AM
I love Russian songs, but I am wary of the people. Great haiku at the end.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/5/2024 1:11:00 PM
The people are wonderful. But the governments of the earth are due for an accounting
Date: 2/5/2024 3:26:00 AM
A well written haibun Tom, anyone who upsets the elite would probably end up in Siberia or just meet with a terrible accident. Tom
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/5/2024 5:34:00 AM
Many JW's were indeed sent to Siberia by Stalin after WWII. Now they are being raided, beaten, and sent to prison.
Date: 2/4/2024 9:48:00 PM
Me thinks, a metaphor of end times, in the mode of Shakespeare, my friend. For such will surely be, just you wait and see. J u s t y o u w a i t a n d s e e ! ! ! I enjoy your Haibun, my poet friend, that know the end. Come again, and we will listen in, to hear what you will say ... that day! :-) Have a great week! Bill
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/5/2024 5:35:00 AM
Certainly going to be an end for blasphemers and persecutors Bill (see Psalm ch 2). Have a great Monday
Date: 2/4/2024 4:32:00 PM
what an intense poem, Tom, but I enjoyed it...the Haiku at the end captured it all. Well done, sir...have a great evening, Sara
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/5/2024 5:36:00 AM
Intense is my middle name. Thx Sara
Date: 2/4/2024 3:36:00 PM
you be dead, mate. Good old Russia. I enjoyed this.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/4/2024 3:37:00 PM
Quite possibly. Thx
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