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The Midnight Hour

Here I am, teetering on the edge, that place between one day and the next, darkest midnight. Still digesting the past day and all its nuances, facing a new day with the coming of morning light. A papery new moon moves across the night sky, and sleep elusive, I am remembering other midnight hours. Hours when the passions of youth were ripe with promise, And the buds of the reality of life had yet to flower. A gentle breeze plays a bit with the window curtain. I watch the moonbeams dance across the bedroom wall. These are the private times that have no expectations, And in wakeful dreams I invite my elusive muse to call....

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Date: 6/30/2014 8:52:00 AM
Back again to applause your win, Great one :)
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Date: 6/29/2014 10:54:00 PM
Dear Barbara, It was a pleasure to read this poem a second time. I knew it was a winner. Congratulations on your win in this contest as well as my Past Lives contest. Sorry you haven't been well lately. Early Tuesday morning I leave to spend nearly all of July with my sister. I'll try to call again, dear. Feel better soon! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:53:00 PM
Your poem was beautiful and very descriptive. I could see the breeze gently moving the curtains, and the moonbeams dancing across the wall! Congratulations on your win, Barbara!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/29/2014 7:53:00 PM
Thank you Kelly..I appreciate my placement.
Date: 6/10/2014 3:05:00 PM
Dear BG, The night hours are always ripe for romance in youth. I like the way you describe "the buds of the reality of life had yet to flower," as that is surely true. Still, you think like a poet and find inspiration in those "wakeful dreams," often occurring in what is called an alpha state. Excellent entry for the contest. I need your opinion on something and am sending a Soup Mail to you. Love from an LNC
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/10/2014 9:43:00 PM
Hi dear, for some reason it wont let me reply in soup mail. Ill try real email.
Date: 6/10/2014 7:41:00 AM
WOW, I sure hope I could come up with something this awesome when I try this challenge. You out did yourself with this gem, Barbara. Do you remember Grass Roots and their song: I'm gonna wait for the Midnight hour? I would like to build on that theme, but this is so much better!!
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Date: 6/10/2014 5:20:00 AM
A nice way to bring back the memories of the past in relaxing mood, Barbara
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Date: 6/9/2014 9:14:00 PM
I hope the muse comes to call in your wakeful dreams, what a relaxing way to ease into midnight. well done, :)
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