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The Melody of Love

The Melody of Love Secrets of the garden are unexpressed delight, flame of passion burning, only two can ignite. Transcending lines of color, creed, hatred and spite, such is the sweetness of which the poets do write. To see your love's visage, pleasing joy of the sight, the cherished persona of the true treasured light, a contentment of heart, affirming this as right, dreams of pleasure abound, appearances invite. The melody of love is the voice of the night, a song to lift the spirit to a greater height. Placing us where only angels can dare alight, a heavenly Earth on which emotions take flight. 1/18/17 12 by 12 Monorhyme - Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 1/30/2017 3:26:00 PM
Not easy to have twelve monorhymes and craft a compelling poem. Nicely done Janis and congratulations! :-)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 1/31/2017 8:31:00 PM
Thanks, Mark.
Date: 1/28/2017 8:01:00 PM
beautiful!! Congrats on the win.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 1/30/2017 1:11:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 1/28/2017 11:14:00 AM
Beautiful words, crafted elegantly, congrats on a fine win!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 1/28/2017 4:13:00 PM
Thanks for the placement John, a very fine contest.
Date: 1/28/2017 6:42:00 AM
Beautifully structured the melody of love. Congratulations!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 1/28/2017 4:14:00 PM
Thank you, Afzal.
Date: 1/27/2017 6:24:00 PM
A very beautiful, poetic 'melody of love', Janis, and a lovely romantic Monorhyme. Congratulations on your podium placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Janis Thompson
Date: 1/28/2017 4:15:00 PM
Hugubac, Sandra. I appreciate your comments, blessings, Janis
Date: 1/19/2017 7:30:00 PM
Very good, Janis, and very romantic good luck in the contest :) Hugs
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Janis Thompson
Date: 1/20/2017 3:55:00 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Date: 1/18/2017 4:37:00 PM
This was beautiful and enchanting Janis. Much luck my friend in the contest.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 1/18/2017 5:51:00 PM
Thanks, Chris.

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