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The Maze of a Missing Mom

Mike's mom made a multitude of missteps; Starting strong, she strode straight into struggles. Calvin convinced her to try crack cocaine. Love lost: little Mike led a lonely, leery life. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Love located: lessons learned, the law leads. Calvin's court convicts him of concealed crimes. Starting strict substance-abuse stance shows strength, Mike's mom meets major milestones: mental, moral, and mutual. April 9, 2022 Using the new form Lind30WCU, 7779 word count per stanza, unrhymed with alliteration.

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Date: 4/11/2022 3:19:00 PM
very cool how you did this, Reason. Who would Calvin be, I wonder.
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Date: 4/18/2022 7:13:00 PM
At the start she would say her "latest" love, how wrong can she be? In the second verse he's only among her "lost" loves. Thanks, Andrea, for the reason and interaction with my alliterative piece.

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