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The Madness of December

Before the lovely heat of an old stove, a recluse sat; outside, a whining wind had now begun to bluster as it wove itself among the trees. Undisciplined, it ripped remaining leaves from every limb which trembled helplessly along its path. It twisted through the woods with wicked vim, upturned soft, quiet snowfall in its wrath, unfurled snow’s swirling flecks upon a pond of porcelain nearby a little shack wherein one warmed himself as morning dawned. As wind blew on, the grizzled lumberjack sat whistling to its icy tone. . . . steadfast. The madness of December cannot last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/18/2020 12:56:00 AM
A nonstop stream of excellent wintery images. I like the wind weaving itself among the trees. Some really nice rhymes too, I love wind with undisciplined and limb with vim. I'm going to go put my sweater on now (in the middle of August, haha!) Great sonnet, my friend.
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Date: 12/27/2010 5:23:00 AM
hey Andrea, I love the description of winter in this, it shows winter to to be cruel and cold hearted, I am definitely a summers girl, but I do love the winters snow Hope you had a lovely Christmas Crystal ~x~
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Date: 12/26/2010 10:54:00 AM
Hi Andrea, your poem sounds bone chilling December cold and freezing windchill.... I'm suddenly chilled. Striking adjectives as I felt I was traveling through space and time in your poem here. Susan
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Date: 12/26/2010 9:46:00 AM
winter can get so cold in December. very true. your write has got me freezing now): ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 12/26/2010 8:12:00 AM
Hi Andrea, You're so right! It is really madness with all this snow. Now it is snowing again for two days and trains, planes and cars have problems. But winter only just begun. Thank you for your kind comments on "Early Fog". You are right. I just followed in this Haiku the Japanese pattern, but I will change to "Ducks already swimming" which sound better! Have a great New Year!!! Love, Gert
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Date: 12/24/2010 11:34:00 AM
well put Andrea,
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Date: 12/24/2010 9:19:00 AM
It is madness at this time of year. ha ha ha Love Phyl
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Date: 12/23/2010 10:11:00 AM
we definitely have reasons for this uncontrolled madness in December, very keen detailed perception of natures behaviour, a lovely read. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/23/2010 8:25:00 AM
What a wonderful expression of this magnificant month... My birth month! Full of magnificant imagery... Loved it Andrea. Happy Holidays to you and yours... Luv Lay
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Date: 12/23/2010 8:23:00 AM
So glad u enjoy my little sing a long to get into the holiday mood Andrea... thankxxx for the compliment on a good job ... I was singing and typing at the same time..haha... going to repost my seven fishes tradition dinner poem today... hope u enjoy again with luv..
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Date: 12/22/2010 9:55:00 PM
A chilling and different look at this time of year Andrea.. Love it.. Yep I am a Christmas baby, my poor mother lol ;) enjoy the days ahead and give your mom a hug from me - love Wilma
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Date: 12/22/2010 8:42:00 PM
Excellent sketch of the month which offers us a variety of experiences sometimes with joys and pleasures and sometimes with the chilly weather and its biting snow. You have created a very touching sketch of the scene right from beginning 'Before the lovely heat of an old stove'. Beautiful write my friend and thanks for your beautiful and precious comments on 'My Prayer on Xmas'. Merry Christmas and best wishes for a very Happy New Year. ...Ravindra
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Date: 12/22/2010 7:12:00 PM
This is a superb piece that you have penned here Andrea. December has been a strange month for bizarre weather everywhere. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. All is appreciated. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. God Bless~Mary~
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Date: 12/22/2010 3:45:00 PM
Well I hope this Winter flies by Andrea and would like to be sitting by the old stove right now luv.. excellent thoughts in your Sonnet ..O Queen..and friend ..with luv..
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Date: 12/22/2010 2:54:00 PM
I consider this a very nice xmas present. Wonderful little piece..BG
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Date: 12/22/2010 2:43:00 PM
Fantastic and fabulous write with such apt images with the December madness. Once I wrote a poem on March madness but on a different ;prospective, Andrea. Happy holidays.
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Date: 12/22/2010 11:20:00 AM
Absolutely delightful to read, Andrea. The imagery is so vivid that I felt the chill as though I was there listening to that lumberjack whistle! A favorite today! Blessings, peace and joy to you, Joe and kids! Merry Christmas and a very happy New Year! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/22/2010 10:26:00 AM
Ooh what a different approach to December-- haven't really thought of it that way (I mean in terms of coldness-- haha more of madness over December traffic over here) -- I really liked how you made this sound chilling and cold-- brr right now-- thanks again for being such a sweet and wonderful friend--- can hardly believe that I've known you for almost a year now--wow!! Super happy to have you as a treasured friend, sweetie-- holiday hugs to you! nikko mwah & hugs!! ok off I really go now ;)
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Date: 12/22/2010 10:23:00 AM
A regular perpetual motion to this one. I like that feature, it keeps the piece enticing to the end. I hope "The madness of December cannot last." LOve, Dave
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Date: 12/22/2010 9:40:00 AM
Yes the madness love the poem Andrea, how are you,, hey it is a good thing that December is the only month that travels fast.. good it does not last,..p.d.
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