The Lover Wind

A lover most capricious is the wind.
At times he goes to Meadow. He exhales. . .
Beneath his breath, her grasses’ blades are pinned
until he’s spent, and then, away he sails.

He’s been to visit Forest many nights.
He gyrates through each tree, whose every limb
responds by rustling leaves, and this excites
him even more. He moans and gusts with vim!

But lust is inundating when Queen Sea
meets Wind.  She surges when he starts to wail.
Her body rolls and rises. . . . Ecstasy
the times he comes as Tempest or as Gale.

But I prefer the side of Wind that’s soft. . .
when he caresses me with gentle waft.

(116 words for the personification contest of Caren Krutsinger)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Arnone Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 2:22 PM
Would love to hear you read this, Andrea. Congrats! :-)
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 7:22 PM
Andrea, congrats on your placement, I love reading poems I have never been able to before! Well done lady :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 5:07 PM
I've never thought of the wind in a sexual context until I read this. Wonderful redo Andrea, congratulations...
Haight Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Awesome personalization, Andrea, love the imagery of the wind with meadow, forest, and especially, the sea. Congratulations on your nice placement! Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 10:13 AM
A lovely personalization, Andrea! Isn't it nice to give these older poems a spotlight again!!??? Congrats to you!!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 8:01 AM
Beautiful! I can see why this one is chosen. Congrats Andrea.
Krampe Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 5:30 AM
Andrea, I loved the poem! Congrats on your win. Agnes
A   Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 2:08 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my blog "BOSSY COW." if you'd like, enjoy my sheer, simple madness. Hugs ~LINDA~
Kendrick Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 11:24 AM
Way to go!!! Yeah!! Sara
Sirak Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 5:45 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea. I enjoyed reading this stunner again.
Johnson Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 6:40 PM
great writing Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Goswami Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 9:47 AM
Well written...You tried to write the expectations of women...It's globally truth..As a man I prefer the side of Wind that’s soft. . . when she caresses me with gentle waft...Best wishes from India...
May Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 8:20 AM
Splendid write Andrea...congrats on a great win
Andresen Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 7:15 AM
- Congratulations on your fine winning poem in Giorgio A.V. last contest, Andrea. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 2:26 AM
Congrats on the fine w2in in the contest Impress me IV, andrea
Nair Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 2:11 AM
Congrats, Andy, promiscuous wind doing it with the meadow, forest and sea, well done!!
Smith Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 7:38 PM
I am quite impressed with this personification Andrea. Congratulations on the win
Ryerson Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 7:34 PM
Giorgio A.V. is not the ONLY one who is impressed with a small poem IV...WOW
Walker  Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 6:53 PM
Personification it is and beautifully written Andrea.... Congratulations on your first place win. :)s and hugs from Oblivion Dark Sunshine - Verlena.
A  Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 6:47 PM
The lover wind, wow, what a win. Amazing.... SKAT
Kilmer Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 9:46 PM
A sailor knows the wind. He lives with her every day. The wolf upon the foredeck the lashing of the ropes in the masts. There's love there to be found as we all must love our work. But until we get to land tis no lover for me. ~Kilmer
Davis Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 8:47 PM
Andrea What a sexy and sensual write about the wind. I will never think of it the same way again. LOL Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Holiday Wishes poem
Babcock Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 6:08 PM
Wha hoo you make the wind sound so sexy on this write. Love the personification you used. love phyl
Seal Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 7:29 PM
That wind certainly gets around Petal, seems he's enjoying himself a little too much lol. You created some perfect relationships in this write. Take care, Richard
Sirak Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 8:10 AM
Beautiful, stunning, sensual poem. There are definitely many facets to the wind.
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