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The Love of a Sandpiper

I watch fascinated 
at its teetering stance,
bobbing up and down,
picking at small insects
that infest the lonely loch,
that it chooses instead of
upland streams or creeks
or fast-flowing rivers,
or in some lonely lake.
 
Today I sit on a small chair,
behind some bushes on the shore
of a lonely loch, away from it all.
Ah sandpiper, are you emulating me?
Are you in search of lonely spots too,
far from the worrisome cities of the world?
Let's leave behind us wars and strife,
enjoy a bit of peace.  Let us be true to love.
 
A breeze strikes, up and up you fly,
with stiff bowed brown wings
and your characteristic cry,
swee-wee-wee, swee-wee-wee.
Where will you go for shelter?
Do you prefer the secluded estuaries
or the protected inland lakes?
 
I see you return, too good a place to miss.
But look, you've found a mate.
Heaven provides, love conquers all.
I think I'll turn in, my wife awaits.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bayles Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 5:43 PM
Wow, so well done, how your life is connected to the life of that wonderful bird.
Fowler Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 5:55 AM
This is so sweet Victor, and reminds one of the blessings of solitude. hugs :)
Gasun Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 3:26 AM
A very lovely story in a beautiful poem my dear friend Victor. I've enjoyed it immensely. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you always and your golden pen.
Milgate Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:07 PM
such a natural and lovely poem -- restful. thank you.
Edmonds  Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 3:33 PM
Birds are amazing, a lovely write Victor, down here or on high love awaits by and by… Belle
Kendrick Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 4:47 AM
Ahh!! So your wife has found a mate that will come home. I enjoyed your story in poetic form. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Rolland Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 11:31 PM
birds emullate me a lot, too, (quote), i love birds watching and listening, yhanks foçr the subtle ending, evru appreciated yann
Horsman Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 6:26 PM
So lovely the sentiment, the realism, the poetry. Harry
Cunningham Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 3:24 PM
Nothing beats being at one with nature, for a short time you forget all the problems in the world. Tom
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February 27, 2023 at 12:17 PM
Lovely write, Victor. Your wife will be there when it's your time, I'm sure. But I sure would like you to stick around a while longer, my friend. And so would the sandpiper too as you became his friend as well :)
Roper Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 12:11 PM
Great verse, Victor, full of imagery and feelings. Blessings my friend
Buehler Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 10:34 AM
I enjoyed this tale of a lone sandpiper, preferring seclusion, with his mate. Interesting and lovely. :)
DiMino Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 10:04 AM
Totally delightful! I was there with you, at the loch, participating in your fine, poetic description. They are not so different from our own cares and needs. Wish I had some wings at times though. Blessings my friend.
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 6:56 AM
- A wonderful poem, Victor ... humans or animals we all have feelings - hugs
Pandit Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 5:53 AM
You create beautiful moments with your words, Victor. Enjoyed the tale. Love is a prime force, as you say.
Poet Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 5:31 AM
Such beautiful use of metaphor you've made of nature and poetry. The sandpiper most certainly won't leave you if it can help it, which is why it's making a comeback now that the opportunity has presented itself.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 5:10 AM
A lovely write…the location, the sandpiper with its actions and sounds. The writer is likewise in a lonely location, in a small chair, meditating on it all. Very nice, dear friend!
Daniel Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 3:19 AM
What a metaphor you have used, Victor, love your ending too:)
George Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 3:00 AM
Probably the sandpiper doesn't want to leave you lonely. That's why it has come back. A beautiful scene from nature and a lovely poem.
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