THE LORD IS MY CAREGIVER

The Lord is my Caregiver indeed I shall not be anxious of my health’s need He makes me to relax, from pressures to be freed He leads me toward serenity with His comforting deed. He restores my soul against guilt’s pain He guides me in the paths of faith exercise-terrain Toward practice of sharing and goodness-gain For His name’s honour without strain. Yes, though I walk for physical strength, and not ride I will enjoy; fighting fears of weight I cannot hide For He is with me, my Saviour, Shepherd,* Redeemer and guide His wisdom and counsel direct my steps not to backslide. He prepares a table with nutritious food before my sight In the presence of sweet delicacies’ tempting blight He feeds me along festive nourishing delight My appetite is savored well and right. Surely kindness of His spirit will flow And I will continually thank Him, making me glow.
*Psalms 23:1 The LORD is my shepherd; I shall not want. (Dramatic Monologue in Rhyme) May 15, 2024 Poem of the Week, May 19-25 3rd place, "Modern Version Psalms 23" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Miranda Hawley; judged on 5/22/2024
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Schlesinger-Fleming Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 10:58 AM
Beautiful write, Beata. Love how you made this Psalm your very own. Well done. God bless.
Galyo Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 2:46 PM
So beautiful and honest! This poem comes from heart! I like your poem! God bless you!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 6:28 AM
Beata, you are so good with your meditations on God and His word. God bless you!
Thomas Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 6:47 PM
He will never leave us or forsake us. He certainly does and will care for us, always.
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May 26, 2024 at 2:33 AM
Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week. The Lord is our caregiver, completely agree… Beryl
Hawley Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 5:31 PM
The Lord is my caregiver, and I agree with the message that the Lord cares for our health. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
Seeker Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 5:02 AM
Such deep faith has remarkable transformative power. Thank you for sharing, Beata and warmest congratulations on POTW.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 9:05 AM
Congratulations, Dear Beata, on POTW. This is a huge honour - and well-deserved !Spiritual, Uplifting, Beautiful!
Jones Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 4:34 PM
Congratulations on potw
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 6:07 AM
An excellent write! Must be for the contest. The first verse speaks of your need for God’s rest. The second verse, cool, with its not pain emphasis, but guilt and the remedy. Great 3rd verse then a kiss to the 4th with nutritious and sweet delicacies and God’s glow as you enjoy His blessings! Fave for me! Congratulations on Poem of the Week, Beata!
Nicole Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 4:55 PM
Dear Beata, I can see how the 23 Psalm inspired your thoughts. It's always good to reflect on this verse. This is so beautiful and uplifting, my dear friend. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations on Poem of the Week. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Anaya Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 10:30 AM
Congratulations on your POTW Beata! Beautiful, spiritual monorhymes. Walking & yoga for stretching, we all need as we meditate and pray everyday. Touching xhugsx
Baker Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 10:25 AM
Congratulations on your faith sharing poem being chosen as the POTW, Beata! Enjoy your special week of recognition, my friend. Bill
Daniel Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 9:34 AM
You went a step higher by rhyming your psalm, Beata, excellent, congratulations on POTW:)
Fowler Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 9:26 AM
I love this solid rhyming and heartfelt prayer. Congratulations on the honor of POTW Beata! :)
Edmonds  Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 8:05 AM
A wonderful poem Beata, the Lord is our Caregiver, “And I will continually thank Him as I glow.” Congratulations on having received the honour of poem of the week… Beryl
Rodgers Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 5:35 AM
Dear Beata, Your poem truly touched my heart. The way you lace faith and serenity into every line is beautiful and inspiring. Congratulations on getting POTW! Your words show the comfort and guidance we receive from our Lord, especially in times of need. Thank you for sharing your gift with us. - Blessings, my dear friend. Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 3:39 AM
Beata, a great faith poem, congratulations on POTW.
Cunningham Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 3:23 AM
Your faith shines through in your verse Beata, trust in God and he'll show you the path. Congratulations to you on this week's POTW honour. Tom
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