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THE LONG GOODBYE

They sit in silence at the table Eating their evening meal He gently wipes the food from her face This life they now live still feels so surreal She now sits in her recliner chair While he makes her a cup of tea Emotionless and still She stares blankly at the T.V He closes his weary eyes and remembers The who she used to be Her sweetness, her laughter And a life together fulfilled and happy Asleep now in her chair He reflects on where she has gone Alone and confused in her own mind He has missed her for so long He helps her put on her nightie Gets her tucked into bed His kisses her and voices “l love you my sweet” As he gently strokes her head She takes his hand and squeezes it softly As a lone tear rolls down her cheek He smiles ,cuddles and reassures her Lovingly whispers “Oh there you are my sweet”!

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Sotto Poet

Date: 1/18/2024 10:28:00 AM

Deb, your poem is an emotionally resonant depiction of love that triumphs over the difficulties associated with dementia. The candid instances that you have documented evoke profound sentiments of kindness and introspection. Congrats on a well-deserved POTD

Deb M
Date: 1/18/2024 10:45:00 AM

Thankyou Lasaad! Debx

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/18/2024 1:47:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on receiving the honour of POTD, beautiful Deb.. (Sorry, I'm a lil late in wishing).. This poem really was so deserving and it touched my heart..

Deb M
Date: 1/18/2024 9:02:00 AM

Thankyou gorgeous girl….Debx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/17/2024 11:04:00 PM

I see as well that it’s POTD. Big congratulations.

Deb M
Date: 1/18/2024 1:24:00 AM

Thanks Richard! Debx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/17/2024 11:03:00 PM

This is beyond moving. A masterpiece. Some people will write a lifetime and not write something as special as this piece.

Deb M
Date: 1/18/2024 1:24:00 AM

Wow…..Richard what can l say to a comment as complimentary as what you have written! Honestly, l am blown away….thankyou so much….you have made my day and perhaps my poetry lifetime!! Debx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2024 5:23:00 AM

This is a hard thing for everyone who has to go through it. It is hard for the person who has dementia (in the early stages), and it is hard for those who are closest to them. You have described it as if you know it very well. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Deb M
Date: 1/18/2024 1:25:00 AM

Thankyou so much Sara…..appreciate your kind words! Debx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/15/2024 4:33:00 PM

Deb M, your poem is a heart-wrenching portrayal of love enduring through the challenges of dementia. The tender moments you've captured resonate deeply, evoking empathy and reflection. Your words beautifully convey the bittersweet journey of love in the face of profound change. - Blessings, Daniel

Deb M
Date: 1/16/2024 1:37:00 PM

What a wonderful comment Daniel….l so appreciate your thoughts and kind words! Thankyou…always ….Debx Call me Deb no need for the M ha! X

Terry Flood

Date: 1/15/2024 10:59:00 AM

Wonderful, Deb. So many of us live in dread of this eventuality but so many are living it now. A most worthy POTD. Congrats.

Deb M
Date: 1/16/2024 1:36:00 PM

Cheers my funny friend! Always a pleasure…Debx

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 1/14/2024 4:14:00 PM

A beautiful poem, so tender and poignant, t could not have been expressed better, Deb. Congratulations on POTD. A fave for me. Wow!!! Take care, Old Duck XX

Deb M
Date: 1/16/2024 1:35:00 PM

Awww my sweet lovely friend…thankyou so much! I miss you a lot! Debx

Charles Messina

Date: 1/14/2024 5:15:00 AM

So lovely, Deb. Life and love described wonderfully. Belated Congratulations on POTD! Charliex

Deb M
Date: 1/16/2024 1:34:00 PM

Thanks Cheeky Charlie! Debx

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/13/2024 9:47:00 PM

A sad and beautiful tale of love. Congratulations on POTD, Deb. Blessings and hugs. :)

Deb M
Date: 1/16/2024 1:34:00 PM

Hi Evelyn….appreciate your kind words! Debx

Paul Willason

Date: 1/13/2024 8:27:00 PM

Catches the expression of love at its most sublime...selfless giving. A very moving poem Deb, one that causes reflection and engagement in the experiece of the tragic.

Deb M
Date: 1/16/2024 1:33:00 PM

Hey Paul….so nice to see you and receive such a gracious comment! Debx

Jan Allison

Date: 1/13/2024 5:39:00 PM

such a touching piece Deb, my heart goes out to anyone in this situation and sadly its a scenario many of us can relate to:-) many congrats on POTD, hugs jan xx

Deb M
Date: 1/16/2024 1:32:00 PM

Thankyou lovely Jan…..good to see you! Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/13/2024 5:35:00 PM

So poignant... and authentic. We are 'at that age' where this stuff happens too often to us. ~ Grandpa

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 11:21:00 PM

Thankyou Grandpa BB!! Appreciate your kind thoughts! Debx

Bill Baker

Date: 1/13/2024 5:09:00 PM

That's so sad, but so lovely and loving at the same time. That will happen to most of us at some point in our lives. A loved one will slowly slip away. I hope we will be as loving as he is or was. Congratulations on your POTD, Deb! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend! Hugs, Bill

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 5:16:00 PM

Thankyou my texan buddy…..always lovely to hear your thoughts my friend!…Hope you are well! Debx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/13/2024 2:09:00 PM

Congrats on POTD. God bless you always. love, Gina

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 2:34:00 PM

Thankyou Gina….God bless you also….Sebx

Christopher Grieves

Date: 1/13/2024 2:00:00 PM

Dear Deb, These words are so full of truth and emotion. Never a better POTD - especially for those of us dealing with similar situations.. This is a beautiful tribute and I wish you love and blessing for all that this means x

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 2:34:00 PM

Hi Christopher….what a truly lovely comment with such kind words! Thankyou so so much! I am very appreciative! Debx

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/13/2024 11:00:00 AM

Deb, your words hold so many tender emotions. Yesterday, my step grandmother left this world, and as my father says, she's now with my grandfather (his father) in heaven. She had this terrible disease. Cherish those around you and hold each moment close. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 2:36:00 PM

Cuddles for you Brandy…Take good care ! Debx

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/13/2024 1:40:00 PM

Hi Deb, I'm doing well. Life is indeed fragile. You're very welcome for the comment, my dear friend.

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 11:21:00 AM

Oh Brandy l am so sorry to hear that…..l hope you are doing ok…..that is so very sad! I appreciate you leaving such a lovely comment…..Thankyou….Debx

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/13/2024 10:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. Your poem accentuates the fears of all seniors.

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 10:49:00 AM

Yes it does Hilda unfortunately….thankyou for your Congratulations l appreciate your comment! Debx

Jim Slaughter

Date: 1/13/2024 10:27:00 AM

An excellent selection for POTD...or any other day, Deb.

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 10:45:00 AM

Aww thanks very sweet Jim …l appreciate your kind words! Debx

Arlo Parker

Date: 1/13/2024 10:25:00 AM

Poignant POTD, Deb. :o(

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 10:44:00 AM

Thanks Mr Arlo! Debx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/13/2024 10:11:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed your lovely/wonderful write again. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away...............

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 10:40:00 AM

Hi Paula….thankyou again dear friend! Debx

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 1/13/2024 9:58:00 AM

Touching, and sad! Dear Poet, you have portrayed the picture of kindness and empathy dealing a terrible disease so well! Congratulations on your POTD.

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 10:40:00 AM

Thankyou so much Malabika….l appreciate your kind words! Debx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/13/2024 8:56:00 AM

Heartbreaking Deb. So well-written. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! LO :)

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 9:03:00 AM

Awww L.O always a pleasure to see your cute peekaboo face hehe! Thankyou so much for your congratulations! Debx

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 1/13/2024 7:59:00 AM

So sweet, yet sad Deb. I felt your great compassion in this poem. Congratulations on the honor of POTD. God Bless..

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 9:02:00 AM

Hi Nancy….l appreciate your lovely comment my friend….thankyou so much! Debx

Warren Doll

Date: 1/13/2024 6:48:00 AM

Deb, a masterful poem about a horrible disease. So deserving of POTD. Congratulations'~ Warren

Deb M
Date: 1/13/2024 6:56:00 AM

Aww thanks Warren thats so nice of you to say! I appreciate your kind thoughts! Debx