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The Lonely Streets

I see a world of flickering gray with many shadows fraught with despair as I slowly walk down the backstreets of my mind on a journey to nowhere trapped between the corner of illusion and reality where yesterday and tomorrow collide one rushing further away the other exploding towards me carrying all the dust and debris of my smoke-filled dreams that vanished on the broken altar of circumstances There are no people traveling my backstreets only shattered glass that cuts into my bare feet with each step as I walk closer to my soul so I may remember the tiny shards where blood-stained hands grasp the last remnants of yesterday's window that had once allowed my tears to roll down its pane as I stared out into the darkness searching for something or someone to rescue me when I heard my soul scream from the pain of betrayal and felt the world turn cold and uninviting... 9/25/19 contest In the backstreets of my mind

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Date: 3/7/2022 7:14:00 AM
Searching and dark times displayed so eloquently! Lonna
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Date: 9/27/2019 4:19:00 AM
- Congratulations on your deep winning poem, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2019 5:27:00 PM
Excellent poem Frederic. Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 9/26/2019 5:25:00 PM
Back with my congratulations. This was well deserved
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Date: 9/26/2019 4:18:00 PM
Frederic congratulations on your win in the contest with this terrific poem and I loved the music !
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Date: 9/26/2019 3:47:00 PM
A sad poem, betrayal is something that is a constant reminder of pain and remains in the backsteets of our minds.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/25/2019 6:16:00 PM
Deep and very descriptive in metaphors, Frederic. Mine is very simplistic next to this one. I expect to see yours at the top!!
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Date: 9/25/2019 5:35:00 PM
I agree ~ very thought-provoking and moving ~ and in the end, so powerful... So many amazing entries for this contest, and yours ranks up there with the best of them <3
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Date: 9/25/2019 5:10:00 PM
Very cool Frederick, deep and thought provoking for sure. Best wishes in the contest
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