The Lonely Streets

I see a world of flickering gray
with many shadows fraught with despair
as I slowly walk down the backstreets of my mind
on a journey to nowhere
trapped between the corner of illusion
and reality where yesterday and tomorrow collide
one rushing further away
the other exploding towards me
carrying all the dust and debris of my smoke-filled dreams
that vanished on the broken altar of circumstances

There are no people traveling my backstreets
only shattered glass
that cuts into my bare feet with each step
as I walk closer to my soul
so I may remember the tiny shards
where blood-stained hands
grasp the last remnants of yesterday's window
that had once allowed my tears to roll down its pane
as I stared out into the darkness
searching for something or someone to rescue me
when I heard my soul scream from the pain of betrayal
and felt the world turn cold and uninviting...



9/25/19 contest In the backstreets of my mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Blodgett Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 7:14 AM
Searching and dark times displayed so eloquently! Lonna
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 4:19 AM
- Congratulations on your deep winning poem, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:27 PM
Excellent poem Frederic. Congratulations for your win :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:25 PM
Back with my congratulations. This was well deserved
La France Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:18 PM
Frederic congratulations on your win in the contest with this terrific poem and I loved the music !
One Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 3:47 PM
A sad poem, betrayal is something that is a constant reminder of pain and remains in the backsteets of our minds.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 6:16 PM
Deep and very descriptive in metaphors, Frederic. Mine is very simplistic next to this one. I expect to see yours at the top!!
There Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 5:35 PM
I agree ~ very thought-provoking and moving ~ and in the end, so powerful... So many amazing entries for this contest, and yours ranks up there with the best of them <3
Green Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 5:10 PM
Very cool Frederick, deep and thought provoking for sure. Best wishes in the contest
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