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The Little Girls Abyss

Ever since I was young I always had this dream About a little girl who lived next door Who drowned in a nearby stream I don't know what possessed me But I always knew one day She would turn up at my door And ask me out to play I mentioned it to my parents They said "listen" and sat me down It happened before we moved here Her bigger sister let her drown The family we bought the house from Moved on from the fear of this Their teenage daughter suffered nightmares And dreamt of a wet abyss Many years have passed I am now well into my teens But this aura that still surrounds me Everywhere I look she's seen One evening I went to shower As normal I pulled back the screen I turned to look in the mirror She was there, staring back at me There was an incredible similarity She looked like me when i was young Now having shown herself, is it over Or has it really just begun UNSUPPORTED CODE

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Date: 9/5/2014 8:22:00 PM
Wow, this was a fantastic story, gave me chills honey, :)
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James Fraser
Date: 9/7/2014 12:46:00 PM
Thank you Casarah, maybe I should do a book purely with my Dark poems. Some day, one day, James :)
Date: 9/5/2014 6:13:00 PM
Spooky but not scary James i really enjoyed this sad write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2014 6:42:00 PM
It is a believable write James that is what is so great about it! Hugs Jan xxx
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James Fraser
Date: 9/5/2014 6:31:00 PM
It isn't supposed to be scary, but relivable! - An abyss can be dark, and sometimes too dark to say. It's within such a dark, that allows thoughts to play. It's within these thoughts of write, that allows ones thoughts to see. My writes go well beyond, it's not just the 'Soup' that sees! ;)

Book: Shattered Sighs