Get Your Premium Membership

The Lighthouse

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Andrea Dietrich.


The sea, a froth of blue, had in the night erupted, and it now was brutally attacking, rising up with all its might against a lonely house too dim to see inside the mist enveloping the shore if not for the bright glow that it sent out to ships, which as they met the waters’ roar, were like small toy boats being cast about. The solitary lighthouse, standing tall, would not relinquish its strong light of hope. Those waves could rage and on that building fall with fury, writhing like a gyroscope, but nature would restore its calm again before the lighthouse let its beacon wane. Written July 23, 2017 for the Lighthouse Contest of Eve Roper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 8/12/2017 4:57:00 AM
I was looking at older contests and found this; congratulations on your wiN! I think it is amazing how the whole first verse makes up one sentence. This is so majestic :)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/11/2017 9:29:00 AM
Andrea, somehow I missed this lovely poem. I have a soft spot for anything maritime and what is more so than a lighthouse. A wonderful write! Congratulations on your 1st place recognition!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/1/2017 12:15:00 AM
I am sure your number one spot cheered you Andrea. Water and wind have such unimaginable power. The sea can demonstrate an unforgiving wrath! Congratulations my friend. I am happy this took first place! Very deserving! : )
Login to Reply
Date: 7/30/2017 7:31:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2017 9:14:00 PM
I cant help but think about how the lighthouse keeper feels on nights like this knowing how tumultuous the seas are and the possibility of the deep capturing it's prey. Wonderful poem Andrea and congrats on the well earned win.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2017 12:23:00 PM
- Congratulations, Andrea :) - A beautiful poem - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2017 10:34:00 AM
Andrea, thank you for entering the contest, you captured the feeling that I was looking for. A beautiful piece of art, congratulations on your win! :) ~*
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2017 9:43:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win with this fine art that you have painted with your artistic brush. To me, poetry is just like painting and you embody that perfectly.
Login to Reply
Roper Avatar
Eve Roper
Date: 7/29/2017 10:36:00 AM
Afzal, you are so right "poetry is just like painting and she did capture the scenery perfectly" ~*
Date: 7/29/2017 8:22:00 AM
As always imagery galore. Powerful write.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2017 5:14:00 AM
Just swinging by again to congratulate you on your First Place win, Andrea. Well done! Regards, John.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2017 4:20:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 7/27/2017 3:21:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Andrea. I can almost hear the waves crashing on the rocks!! Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/26/2017 6:53:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Very descriptive and expressive..Reads like a great contender for the contest..Thanks for dropping by..At the top of the page to the left side you will see PoetrySoup then an empty box where you can type things then click on the magnifying glass, well, right there type Unkie and it will lead you to my short story you will have to look through list and see where is says Sara Kendrick, it will say short story, and it will say Unkie..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 7/26/2017 6:22:00 PM
You can feel the violence before the calm, well done, very good visual expressed in this poem...good luck
Login to Reply
Date: 7/26/2017 1:56:00 AM
wow this is beautiful, good luck.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/25/2017 11:50:00 AM
This is so beautiful Andrea... Great sonnet... Reads like a winner...
Login to Reply
Date: 7/25/2017 9:19:00 AM
This is an amazing sonnet, Andrea:)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/25/2017 3:14:00 AM
A lovely Sonnet and entry Andrea! The power of the sea as unpredictable as the weather. The painting is impressive too! : )
Login to Reply
Date: 7/25/2017 12:58:00 AM
Terrific, Andrea, hugely descriptive and atmospheric. I am holding on grimly to the edge of the desk as I type this. Good luck in the contest. Viv x
Login to Reply
Date: 7/24/2017 7:50:00 PM
wonderful! sounds like a winning entry to me, andrea...
Login to Reply
Date: 7/24/2017 5:07:00 PM
Well done Andrea....good luck in the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/24/2017 4:37:00 PM
Indeed a delightful sonnet, Andrea. I like how you managed to write the first 8 lines in one single continuous sentence, considering that meter and rhyme were not sacrificed in the process. ~ Regards // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 7/24/2017 12:46:00 PM
Wonderful work Andrea, should place very high...
Login to Reply
Date: 7/24/2017 12:01:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet Andrea. I enjoyed it :)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/24/2017 11:32:00 AM
I hope this beauty places well for you Andrea, if anyone can write a great sonnet it is you:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
12

Book: Shattered Sighs