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The Last Organ Grinder

The faint sound of breathing is heard in the silence of darkness where eyes gaze into the sky with tear-stained thoughts how still the moment the smallness of being reliving each sorrow from yesterday as a metaphor that stands on the edge of emotion looking into an abyss, feeling nothing awakened by a mirror of reflections that flutter in the background like the last organ grinder pulling his worn-out cart into the shadows on an empty cobbled street playing, though no one hears beneath the last lamplight as a quiet death of echos fade into the dim-lit realm to leave an after-image in the swollen eyes and a haunting sound of sadness that endures through the calamity of loneliness

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Date: 12/2/2023 9:32:00 AM
Oh Frederick -- so sad and beautiful.
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Date: 11/24/2023 7:14:00 AM
Truly beautiful write Frederic, well done!
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Date: 11/23/2023 3:48:00 AM
hauntingly beautiful Frederic congrats on your win, :)
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Date: 11/22/2023 8:52:00 PM
Beautiful write, Frederic, I love the line, "tear-stained thoughts, quiet death of echos fade, haunting sound of sadness. I enjoyed reading your work. Congratulations on your win in Silent's contest.
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Date: 11/22/2023 11:30:00 AM
how still the moment the smallness of being reliving each sorrow from yesterday as a metaphor that stands on the edge of emotion looking into an abyss, feeling nothing awakened by a mirror of reflections that flutter in the background.. Deeply emotive lines and an excellent poem for the theme.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Frederic Parker
Date: 11/22/2023 6:07:00 PM
Thank you Silent One
Date: 10/24/2023 7:17:00 AM
“ playing, though no one hears” “ calamity of loneliness” what brilliant lines in this deeply moving write! I havent even started on this prompt yet but seeing yours make it seem like its an easy one to do and write for! I love the flow and how you’ve painted imagery in such a creative manner! Absolutely gorgeous! With such heartfelt and deep emotions! I think silent one will like this one! Goodluck for the contest.
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Date: 10/23/2023 6:26:00 PM
like the last organ grinder pulling his worn-out cart into the shadows on an empty cobbled street…beneath the last lamplight…great imagery!
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Date: 10/23/2023 12:40:00 PM
- A last sigh ... in loneliness ... a sad poem, excellently written, Frederic - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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