The Last Organ Grinder

The faint sound of breathing
is heard in the silence of darkness
where eyes gaze into the sky
with tear-stained thoughts
  how still the moment
  the smallness of being
reliving each sorrow from yesterday
as a metaphor
that stands on the edge of emotion
looking into an abyss, feeling nothing
awakened by a mirror of reflections
that flutter in the background
like the last organ grinder
pulling his worn-out cart into the shadows
on an empty cobbled street
playing, though no one hears
beneath the last lamplight
as a quiet death of echos
fade into the dim-lit realm
to leave an after-image in the swollen eyes
and a haunting sound of sadness
that endures through the calamity of loneliness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Peck Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 9:32 AM
Oh Frederick -- so sad and beautiful.
Inman Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Truly beautiful write Frederic, well done!
Rose  Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 3:48 AM
hauntingly beautiful Frederic congrats on your win, :)
Roper Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 8:52 PM
Beautiful write, Frederic, I love the line, "tear-stained thoughts, quiet death of echos fade, haunting sound of sadness. I enjoyed reading your work. Congratulations on your win in Silent's contest.
One Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 11:30 AM
how still the moment the smallness of being reliving each sorrow from yesterday as a metaphor that stands on the edge of emotion looking into an abyss, feeling nothing awakened by a mirror of reflections that flutter in the background.. Deeply emotive lines and an excellent poem for the theme.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Parker Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 6:07 PM
Thank you Silent One
Empress Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 7:17 AM
“ playing, though no one hears” “ calamity of loneliness” what brilliant lines in this deeply moving write! I havent even started on this prompt yet but seeing yours make it seem like its an easy one to do and write for! I love the flow and how you’ve painted imagery in such a creative manner! Absolutely gorgeous! With such heartfelt and deep emotions! I think silent one will like this one! Goodluck for the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 6:26 PM
like the last organ grinder pulling his worn-out cart into the shadows on an empty cobbled street…beneath the last lamplight…great imagery!
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 12:40 PM
- A last sigh ... in loneliness ... a sad poem, excellently written, Frederic - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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