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The Last Organ Grinder

Written: October 20, 2023, If an opera cannot be played by an organ grinder, it's not going to achieve immortality. By Thomas Beecham
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Only a rival who never yields may alter reality, From birth to death, beats thrive—no mortality. Crashing core causes a cosmic climax of chaos, Fierce floods float the forlorn fable of pathos. Dwellings were buried by a conundrum. The slope has swallowed the humdrum. Dusk of the mind is gingerly complete. Gazing at crimson flies worn rilling feet An ancient quiet trail—for waves and wind. Ragged timbre limbs—cracks are left behind. Tombstones had been raised from the quayside The last organ grinder and another army replied. Over lyrical, his weary fingers can play guerrillas, The last organ grinder is a throwback to bygone eras. Camarilla would gather heralds, full of delight, While fiercely turning—crank with all his might. Forum from which fantasies fly and faith flourish The sounds that the organ grinder may nourish. He sang songs of suffering, whimsy, and anguish, Sopping a range of feelings across—till languish. Rumors raced to spread slander in solid deceit, Selfish ghost-face snitch won a vexed word beat. Lief spins fearfully. Cover up, ladies and youngsters, Slaying in session, straddling on wings of musters. A Walkyrie-lanced loop loom is a lethal lethe lie, Blood dough whispers emerged and could decry. Tarnished thrash tittles—timorous tonic ties taught, A fabric-picked spying plot caught by a grim sought. Saltwater swindler screams sought signs of a spider Gloomy guile grins gushes on ghastly organ grinder. It's the witching hour, and a trigger finger is itching, I heard awful news and saw empathy fuel snitching.
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Goldsmith Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely "The Last Organ Grinder" write/story/picture. You are a wonderful storyteller. Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
Rose  Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 3:49 AM
beautifully breathily penned Sotto, congrats on your win :)
Roper Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 8:55 PM
Beautiful write, Lasaad, enjoyed reading your work. Congratulations on your win in Silent's contest.
Dutta Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 8:35 PM
A wonderful poem as usual whelming readers. Big Congrats to win. Tarnished thrashed tittles- timorous tonic ties taught.. What an amazing alliteration ! Have Great Days.
One Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 11:32 AM
Saltwater swindler screams sought signs of a spider Gloomy guile grins gushes on ghastly organ grinder. It's the witching hour, and a trigger finger is itching, I heard awful news and saw empathy fuel snitching.. An excellent finish to your poem that rhymes and flows so well.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Maverick Avatar
October 25, 2023 at 3:44 PM
Well a lot put in here it seems Sotto, a lot of Changability here yot it has a conclusikn Eood to see a win with this.'
Pandit Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 5:43 AM
Forum from which fantasies fly and faith flourish The sounds that the organ grinder may nourish. He sang songs of suffering, whimsy, and anguish, Sopping a range of feelings across—till languish.---you built his portrait splendidly my friend.
Empress Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 4:41 AM
Such profound truths woven here, sadly rumors spread like wildfires, and deceit is well celebrated in this weak world, i see so much of this in this world that i cant help but agree with every word you’ve woven here in such a soul hitting manner! You’ve written very well for the prompt: unique and creative in a very poetic manner! as always brilliant diction and rhymes: looks like rhymes come so easy for you and they are very captivating! Beautiful alliterations i think silent one will love. BOL
Severo Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 1:07 AM
beautiful, I aspire to rise you your level, loved reading this xoxoxo
George Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 9:22 PM
Each day your vocabulary grows and it makes us tipsy. With what artistry you describe the organ grinder. His music swells in our hearts. "He sang songs of suffering, whimsy, and anguish, Sopping a range of feelings across—till languish". Any subject yields to your wonderful imagination. I am in awe of your poetic abilities.
Faulkner Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 8:57 PM
You have such a vivid imagination, and your rhymes are so original, I really like 'quayside/replied' and 'flourish/nourish' - best of luck in the contest~
Jones Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 8:21 PM
You are a great storyteller wrapping this poem in alliteration and rhyme. It is a fantastic piece for contest. Good luck.
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