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The Last Kiss

I will never, ever forget that last sweet kiss, while holding my baby boy to my beating heart; then, I had to let him drift up to his abyss, I would give my own life so that he not depart. While holding my baby boy to my beating heart, my boy who never got to see the azure sky; I would give my own life- so that he not depart, asking my God why, why him, why not let me die. My boy who never got to see the azure sky, I would have given him all my knowledge each day; I ask my God why, why him, why not let me die, and now I go to his small lonely grave to pray. I would have given him all my knowledge each day, oh, the day he was buried, I was made of stone; and now I go to his small lonely grave to pray, I have no emotion- I am ice to the bone. Oh, the day he was buried, I was made of stone, then, I had to let him drift up to his abyss; I have no emotion- I am ice to the bone, but will never, ever forget that last sweet kiss. ___________________________ November 27, 2018 Poetry/Pantoum/The Last Kiss Copyright Protected, ID 18-1089-244-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, The Last . . . sponsor, Silent One First Place
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Moorman Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 3:50 PM
I can only say, that you have my deepest heartfelt sympathy. The only way I can even closely relate is through the sudden death of my wife of 20 years and I didn't get to say good-bye! I will continue to remember you daily in my prayers.
La France Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 7:01 PM
~.~
La France Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Kim, thanks so much for visiting with the love and congratulations ~
Rodrigues Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 6:34 PM
A poignant write..so sweet and sad. Congratulations, Dear Heart!
La France Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 8:50 AM
:-)
La France Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 10:44 AM
Thank you Eve, Susan, Mark, and Anne-Lise for visiting my poem with those great comments and congratulations, appreciate a lot ~
Roper Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:01 PM
A wonderful deeply moving well written poem, Dear Heart, congratulations on your 1st place win.
La France Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 10:44 AM
Smile~
Ashley Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 9:25 PM
The poignant intimacy of your poem is so sadly beautiful and haunting, Dear Heart. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
La France Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Smile~
Elam Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Mournful and beautiful flow and rhythm. Congrats on your win!
La France Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Smile~
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:13 AM
- Many beautiful and deeply moving poems for this contest ... congratulations on your win, B.W. :) - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Hugs~
One Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Great pantoum Constance, you did this very well with good rhymes and flow, but most importantly you did it correctly.. A common theme of the last kiss for this contest, but your form was different... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
La France Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 10:43 AM
Silent, thanks for the contest and for my awesome win, so proud to be on your winning list ~
La France Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 9:22 AM
Thank you Laura, Andrea, Chris, Anne-Lise, and Victor for visiting my poem with wonderful comments, appreciate ~
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 9:21 PM
Wow, this is so deep and sad, Constance. The poetic repitition of the form truly emphasizes your raw emotions as you mourn the loss of your sweet baby. I believe I remember this was a real event in your life..I can only imagine the pain of the loss of a child.
La France Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:46 AM
:-)
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 6:03 PM
oh my goodness, this is so beautiful how you portrayed your grief. Stunning, dear heart. A fave.
La France Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:47 AM
:-) a big thanks for the FAV!!!
Green Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 4:22 PM
How can a poem so beautiful express such sorrow and loss. I am enchanted by your words and deeply saddened by the theme. Wow, this one touched me deeply. Much luck in the contest.
La France Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:47 AM
:-)
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 1:42 PM
- A sad reminder for us who have lost a baby - Beautifully written, good luck in the contest B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Hugs~
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