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I will never, ever forget that last sweet kiss, while holding my baby boy to my beating heart; then, I had to let him drift up to his abyss, I would give my own life so that he not depart. While holding my baby boy to my beating heart, my boy who never got to see the azure sky; I would give my own life- so that he not depart, asking my God why, why him, why not let me die. My boy who never got to see the azure sky, I would have given him all my knowledge each day; I ask my God why, why him, why not let me die, and now I go to his small lonely grave to pray. I would have given him all my knowledge each day, oh, the day he was buried, I was made of stone; and now I go to his small lonely grave to pray, I have no emotion- I am ice to the bone. Oh, the day he was buried, I was made of stone, then, I had to let him drift up to his abyss; I have no emotion- I am ice to the bone, but will never, ever forget that last sweet kiss. ___________________________ November 27, 2018 Poetry/Pantoum/The Last Kiss Copyright Protected, ID 18-1089-244-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, The Last . . . sponsor, Silent One First Place

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Date: 12/5/2018 3:50:00 PM
I can only say, that you have my deepest heartfelt sympathy. The only way I can even closely relate is through the sudden death of my wife of 20 years and I didn't get to say good-bye! I will continue to remember you daily in my prayers.
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Date: 12/6/2018 7:01:00 PM
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Date: 12/3/2018 8:50:00 AM
Kim, thanks so much for visiting with the love and congratulations ~
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Date: 12/2/2018 6:34:00 PM
A poignant write..so sweet and sad. Congratulations, Dear Heart!
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Date: 12/3/2018 8:50:00 AM
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Date: 12/2/2018 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Eve, Susan, Mark, and Anne-Lise for visiting my poem with those great comments and congratulations, appreciate a lot ~
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Date: 12/1/2018 11:01:00 PM
A wonderful deeply moving well written poem, Dear Heart, congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Date: 12/2/2018 10:44:00 AM
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Date: 12/1/2018 9:25:00 PM
The poignant intimacy of your poem is so sadly beautiful and haunting, Dear Heart. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/2/2018 10:46:00 AM
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Date: 12/1/2018 4:56:00 PM
Mournful and beautiful flow and rhythm. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/2/2018 10:46:00 AM
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Date: 12/1/2018 11:13:00 AM
- Many beautiful and deeply moving poems for this contest ... congratulations on your win, B.W. :) - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/2/2018 10:46:00 AM
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Date: 12/1/2018 10:34:00 AM
Great pantoum Constance, you did this very well with good rhymes and flow, but most importantly you did it correctly.. A common theme of the last kiss for this contest, but your form was different... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 12/1/2018 10:43:00 AM
Silent, thanks for the contest and for my awesome win, so proud to be on your winning list ~
Date: 11/28/2018 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Laura, Andrea, Chris, Anne-Lise, and Victor for visiting my poem with wonderful comments, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/27/2018 9:21:00 PM
Wow, this is so deep and sad, Constance. The poetic repitition of the form truly emphasizes your raw emotions as you mourn the loss of your sweet baby. I believe I remember this was a real event in your life..I can only imagine the pain of the loss of a child.
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:46:00 AM
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Date: 11/27/2018 6:03:00 PM
oh my goodness, this is so beautiful how you portrayed your grief. Stunning, dear heart. A fave.
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:47:00 AM
:-) a big thanks for the FAV!!!
Date: 11/27/2018 4:22:00 PM
How can a poem so beautiful express such sorrow and loss. I am enchanted by your words and deeply saddened by the theme. Wow, this one touched me deeply. Much luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:47:00 AM
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Date: 11/27/2018 1:42:00 PM
- A sad reminder for us who have lost a baby - Beautifully written, good luck in the contest B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:45:00 AM
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