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The Last Beat of a Homeless Heart

A cool breeze whips and the Fahrenheit dips a night lost on a lonesome road reaching out to those in need attempting to spark the last beat of a homeless heart Preachers preached some souls were reached love was everywhere to be found to give.. to keep to sow.. to reap but in private you couldn't hear a sound hearts live to love but how long can they live in a world full of take and no give loyal eyes they no longer cry and a heartbeat slows as time slips by

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Date: 2/20/2017 6:58:00 AM
I am reading a few of your older poems, and oh Tim, how beautiful and deeply sad this is. To give..to keep/to sow..to reap. Sometimes we give so much, that the balance is off, far off, and we just need that one hand that reaches out and says that we matter too!. I know, I am not talking about love, but your poem covers both really.
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Date: 1/10/2016 1:51:00 AM
sad expressive poem
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Date: 12/30/2015 4:37:00 AM
You have got it explained like in a portrait...a good poem it is
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Date: 12/28/2015 11:44:00 AM
What a heartbreaking and deep poem my friend , I'm glad I've got the chance to read it....hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 12/27/2015 1:24:00 PM
- Heartbreaking, Tim - "in a world full of take and no give " .... so true - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/26/2015 5:51:00 PM
There is nothing sadder than the loss of hope...expressed very well, Tim.
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Date: 12/26/2015 4:54:00 PM
I am at a loss for words Tim, absolutely excellent how you have expressed these emotions and thoughts! A7
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Date: 12/26/2015 3:20:00 PM
oh such a sad write Tim am so used to your romantic writes:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/26/2015 3:10:00 PM
i feel your sentiments here, tim....grreat stuff.. huggs
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