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The Lake

patterns on water, in the clear blue lake, what makes them appear? perhaps the air gush, a little trout’s flip, or bubbles from deep, a lost frond of leaf, by the boatman’s oar, when water birds soar, family of ducks, little pup that skips, his owner’s foot flips, we shall never know! but the lake remains, as placid as can, unperturbed and calm! nature’s guardian, that provides for all, fluid sustenance, a place for a walk, weather to cool down, a home for creatures, but remains serene, radiating love, beauty, peace and joy! the patterns reflect, the Sun and the Moon, the milky way stars, holding a mirror, to God’s creation! ever considered how much it would take, to be like that lake? 1st Placement Written 08/April/2021 Anacreontic verse poetry competition Silent one sponsored 5 syllables each line 33 lines.

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Date: 8/1/2021 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "The lake" is a creative story/write. Wish I was there. "Love it" Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/1/2021 11:14:00 AM
Thanks Paula! God bless!!:)
Date: 7/31/2021 6:08:00 AM
Love the imagery of what patterns the lake! Congratulations a,
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/31/2021 11:40:00 AM
Thanks Kim! Pleased you like it.:)
Date: 7/29/2021 6:53:00 AM
Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/29/2021 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Silent one. Good to have you back, do not worry about the delay. Hope you are well

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