The Lady Down the Lane

On my walk around the green meadow
in the sun splattered mesmeric mornings,
I used to see an old lady of the neighborhood,
sitting straight like a lone statue of cold stone 
on the road-side bench I always crossed.
The golden stream of surging sunbeam
cascaded down the engraved web of rills
on her septuagenarian fragile face.

She would raise her thin ivory hands
from the recess of reclined lap unmoved,
flail in frail gesture in the scented air,
murmuring ‘good morning’ perhaps,
I could hardly hear in the rustle of leaves,
but my long day waited to begin
with the shining dawn of her smile,
drenching me in the silent shower of joy.

I still walk as the senile sun rises everyday,
but its searching rays saddened like me,
don’t find the lady on the bench,
but she walks smiling with me, 
down the memory lane.

Written : March 22, 2020
July 23, 2022
Contest : 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 9 
Sponsored by  : Mark Toney

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/15/2022 3:53:00 PM
Lovely poem, Subimal :)
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Date: 4/7/2022 12:51:00 PM
Very poignant and tender. If only people like this elderly lady knew how important they are, even to passers by.
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Date: 5/26/2020 1:19:00 PM
This one is a captivating read from your pen full of emotions and nostalgia. You write beautifully Subimal. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 5/25/2020 8:21:00 PM
This poem is one of your best....I wonder how you select ..all your compositions are soooo sooo unique... a big applause from my side.. Love your poems
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Date: 5/25/2020 7:21:00 PM
A wonderful write Subimal, congrats on another top win!
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Date: 4/19/2020 9:41:00 PM
Do you really have to memorize where memory lane may be?
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Date: 3/31/2020 7:47:00 AM
Charming, poignant, colorful, and graced with texture, Endearing, and Heartfelt. You have painted a beautiful picture here, my friend. Congrats on your Placement. Ps, I will want to reread this, so I have tucked into my favs. JC Hawkens
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Date: 3/29/2020 10:51:00 PM
Oh Subimal, this endearing look at a lovely old soul had me captivated. You have shown her charm and grace and honored her with the devotion she deserves. I loved this beautiful poem. Congratulations on your high placement that brought tears to my eyes. You write divinely my friend. This is going g into my Faves! xxoo
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Date: 3/29/2020 6:22:00 PM
This is so warm and life affirming, the ending so sweet, congratulations on placing in the contest, Subimal.
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Date: 3/29/2020 3:10:00 PM
Whether this was fiction or true, it was a real pleasure to read, Subimal.
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Date: 3/22/2020 2:48:00 PM
Very nice!
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