The Lady Down the Lane

On my walk around the green meadow
in the sun splattered mesmeric mornings,
I used to see an old lady of the neighborhood,
sitting straight like a lone statue of cold stone 
on the road-side bench I always crossed.
The golden stream of surging sunbeam
cascaded down the engraved web of rills
on her septuagenarian fragile face.

She would raise her thin ivory hands
from the recess of reclined lap unmoved,
flail in frail gesture in the scented air,
murmuring ‘good morning’ perhaps,
I could hardly hear in the rustle of leaves,
but my long day waited to begin
with the shining dawn of her smile,
drenching me in the silent shower of joy.

I still walk as the senile sun rises everyday,
but its searching rays saddened like me,
don’t find the lady on the bench,
but she walks smiling with me, 
down the memory lane.

Written : March 22, 2020
July 23, 2022
Contest : 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 9 
Sponsored by  : Mark Toney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Peck Avatar
April 15, 2022 at 3:53 PM
Lovely poem, Subimal :)
Fenn Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 12:51 PM
Very poignant and tender. If only people like this elderly lady knew how important they are, even to passers by.
Mishra Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 1:19 PM
This one is a captivating read from your pen full of emotions and nostalgia. You write beautifully Subimal. Congratulations on your win :)
Mitra Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 8:21 PM
This poem is one of your best....I wonder how you select ..all your compositions are soooo sooo unique... a big applause from my side.. Love your poems
Hamilton Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 7:21 PM
A wonderful write Subimal, congrats on another top win!
Horn Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:41 PM
Do you really have to memorize where memory lane may be?
Hawkens Avatar
March 31, 2020 at 7:47 AM
Charming, poignant, colorful, and graced with texture, Endearing, and Heartfelt. You have painted a beautiful picture here, my friend. Congrats on your Placement. Ps, I will want to reread this, so I have tucked into my favs. JC Hawkens
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 10:51 PM
Oh Subimal, this endearing look at a lovely old soul had me captivated. You have shown her charm and grace and honored her with the devotion she deserves. I loved this beautiful poem. Congratulations on your high placement that brought tears to my eyes. You write divinely my friend. This is going g into my Faves! xxoo
Faulkner Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 6:22 PM
This is so warm and life affirming, the ending so sweet, congratulations on placing in the contest, Subimal.
Watson Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 3:10 PM
Whether this was fiction or true, it was a real pleasure to read, Subimal.
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 2:48 PM
Very nice!
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