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The Lad

The Lad gave his heart to his eye's

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James Fraser

Date: 10/18/2010 5:23:00 PM

Simple but creative JL the 3rd, very clever indeed. I'm so glad you enjoyed 'A Cry for Help' thank you for your honourable comment. Have a lovely evening >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 11:48:00 PM

ANyway, john, the meang of this is beautiful! Luv, Andrea (ps. there was no little bird. I only wish. Half my poems are figments of my imagination) Luv, Andrea

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/19/2010 10:45:00 AM

Enjoyed this write. God Bless Phyl

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/17/2010 5:45:00 AM

uhoh could end in blindness...LOL good one!

Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2010 11:22:00 PM

you must look with your heart, not just your eyes~~ thank you for your comment on my poetry~~ want to meet in france for breakfast and we can listen to the mourning doves~~ that makes no sense to anyone but us~~