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The Known-Unknown

I was a Moon in a dark abyss Wandering alone in tormented solace As aimlessly as a fish in bowl Glumly glad within my alien abode In a spur ___ you appeared from Nowhere A Blackhole pulling me towards its angelic snare Rearranging the space time fabric ___ To a whole new world ___ mystifying yet aesthetic And I couldn't resist, for that Benignity set my heart ablaze___ filled its Valence shell Entwined with you I will step in eternity soon Hoping, your floral rugs bear stars and moons..!!

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Susan Ashley

Date: 2/4/2023 7:44:00 PM

Dear Paghunda, it's a joy for me to return to this exquisite poem for another read. The depth of your rich imagery enchants my heart's imagination to no end. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/15/2023 10:28:00 AM

Your remarks are very uplifting Susan... It means a lot. Thank you so much. Stay blessed!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/1/2023 10:39:00 AM

Who could "resist" the beauty of the spell your words cast? "Floral rugs of moon and stars" indeed! Truly a reflection on entering a new world of beauty and peace. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/2/2023 5:30:00 AM

Thank you for sharing in the emotions of this poem with me and for sharing your valued thoughts so generously. I am humbled and honored by your kind words and felicitations.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/1/2023 8:13:00 AM

Very romantic and sensual poem Paghunda. Congratulations on your win! :)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/2/2023 5:32:00 AM

I am filled with gratitude to receive your precious thoughts and heartwarming congrats. Blessings

FJ Thomas

Date: 12/19/2022 4:39:00 PM

You have a gift for painting pictures with your words. Enchanting Paghunda.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/2/2023 5:32:00 AM

Your words are uplifting,and they are received with gratitude. Thank you!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/13/2022 5:25:00 AM

The arrival is inevitable. Beautiful poem. Congratulations!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/2/2023 5:29:00 AM

Thanks

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/12/2022 10:12:00 AM

Or is it the death, the passing over, you are talking about! Yes it might be! Thanks - Marshall

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/12/2022 10:10:00 AM

A blackhole snare but angelic! "In hope that your floral rugs have moon and stars " what a beautiful finish! completely submerged was I, in a surreal feeling! The poem fully satiated my reading soul! The lines gave me the feeling that she or the place is something dark, but the last line says, you finally accept it! A beautiful poem. Thanks - Marshall.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 6/27/2022 3:04:00 AM

Thanks you

Anil Deo

Date: 1/8/2022 6:22:00 AM

Over 300 readers! Though I read this poem before, it was rewarding to witness microcosm & macrocosm commune with time. Salaams, shalomShalOm

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/15/2023 10:30:00 AM

I am glad you enjoyed it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/11/2021 9:04:00 PM

May the 'Benignity' wend its way toward Infinity! Peace and Tranquility, Gershon

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/7/2022 12:55:00 AM

Ameen, summa'ameen.. Thank you

Gail Debole

Date: 11/26/2021 8:09:00 AM

As soon as I read the line, "I was a moon in a dark abyss," I knew that I would be reading this poem to the end. Superb imagery and deep thoughts. Thank you for sharing with the world!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/27/2021 9:48:00 AM

My pleasure Gail

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 11/20/2021 6:56:00 AM

You ignite your reader's soul with your mystic and lighting poetry, Paghunda! You are a moon with a shining ink! An immense pleasure to join such an enchanting feel! My deepest regards and blessings.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/20/2021 9:31:00 AM

My pleasure Dirzi.. Thank you for the appreciation. Blessings!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/20/2021 5:14:00 AM

Enchanting write, Paghunda:)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/20/2021 9:32:00 AM

Ethereal :)

Anil Deo

Date: 11/19/2021 10:25:00 PM

You write as the great Ghazal poets, wow! Blessings, Salaam, Shalom shalom Shanthi Om. I have been made aware "she" may rearrange my space-time fabric. Thanx again P. Zahid.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/20/2021 9:29:00 AM

Really? I did try writing a Ghazal on Silent One's request for his competition. But that was disastrous... Lol. Anyway, thank you for the kind reviews. I'm honoured.

Valsa George

Date: 11/18/2021 8:09:00 PM

Your stepping into a new zone sounds so dreamy and enchanting ! May you enter into an ethereal realm, strewn with rubies and diamonds, stars and starlets.Enjoyed, Paghunda!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/20/2021 9:27:00 AM

Ameen, ameen.. Summa'ameen :) Thank you Valsa!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/18/2021 12:28:00 PM

You had me at “Benignity” what a great word. I so enjoyed this piece. :0)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/20/2021 9:26:00 AM

I am glad you enjoyed it.

John Gondolf

Date: 11/18/2021 9:11:00 AM

What a beautiful poem, Paghunda, thanks for sharing it. John

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/20/2021 9:25:00 AM

My pleasure

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/18/2021 7:16:00 AM

Enjoyed your poem--your creative spirits shine!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/20/2021 9:26:00 AM

Amin

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/16/2021 10:36:00 PM

Oh wow, this is special poetry, an artist with a mind set of creativity.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/18/2021 6:29:00 AM

Aw thanks Harry :)

Judy Ball

Date: 11/10/2021 7:41:00 AM

Lovely Paghunda. So beautifully worded and well described. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/15/2021 7:21:00 AM

Thanks JB

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/9/2021 9:35:00 AM

Paghunda my lovely friend,your poems just scream creative talent - this is outstanding work and as I have said once before, your work will be recognized far and wide, now and forever. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/15/2021 7:21:00 AM

Oh my goodness, Jennifer! You are too kind. Thank you :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2021 6:27:00 PM

Beautiful!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/15/2023 10:29:00 AM

Thanks

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/7/2021 5:41:00 PM

Romantic brilliance spills from your poetic pen, Paghunda! Creative use of oxymorons illustrate the contrasting drama of the known/unknown with style and finesse.. Especially adore your last two lines! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/8/2021 9:40:00 AM

Your words are really uplifting Ashley. You are so thoughtful. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you!