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The Know

I dread thee soul.
The bold it rows,
Perchance, A mistake.

I see yee soul.
The form it takes,
It appears to be...of a lake.

A lake to all, that i endow,
To all of which, that i do wish.
Maybe you are...indeed,
For me the lake.
For i know yee soul,
The woo's it gives,
Its epistemology,
Knitting me,
Making me, myself...

Copyright © Srveer Bhati | Year Posted 2024

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/8/2024 6:50:00 PM Congrats on POTD! Zeroed in on epistemology. Poem has a dream like quality. Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/14/2024 1:09:00 AM Thank you!

Brandy Nicole Date: 7/5/2024 5:10:00 PM So many thoughts to ponder within. Congratulations Srveer, on Poem of the Day. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 11:28:00 PM Thank you!

Panagiota Romios Date: 7/5/2024 2:49:00 PM Congratulations, Steve, may this POTD, be one, of many more to come. Panagiota Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 11:27:00 PM Im sorry i didn't know. Thank you very much for your kind words Panagiota! Panagiota Romios Date: 7/5/2024 5:46:00 PM No, Sveer your name is quite unusual and I have visual problems! And I was complimenting you on your first POTD as were other poets. Apologies for my error. With my name, I have been called by the wrong nane, more than omce. Panagiota Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 3:07:00 PM I think you by accident have my name misread but still thank you for your kind words!

Nancy Kaufman Date: 7/5/2024 8:38:00 AM Dear Srveer, Hearty congratulations on the POTD and a very warm welcome to Poetry Soup. I do hope you find the site to be as encouraging as I have, a novice poet,and make many new poetry friends a long the way. Blessings to you.. Nancy Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 9:35:00 AM Thank you for your kind words!

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/5/2024 8:03:00 AM Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. win. I enjoyed reading "The Know" write. Have a blessed day writing away....................... Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 8:04:00 AM Thank you!

Beata Agustin Date: 7/5/2024 7:50:00 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 7:52:00 AM Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/5/2024 5:52:00 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 6:53:00 AM Thank you!

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 7/5/2024 5:46:00 AM Hello Srveer, I am so sorry that I posted it to the wrong one. But I did want to congratulate you on your POTD. I read it earlier and thought you are a poet that I would like to follow. – Blessings, My Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 9:37:00 AM Thank you for your kind words!

Tom Woody Date: 7/5/2024 5:40:00 AM Nice to meet you srveer. Enjoy your special day Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 6:53:00 AM Thank you!

Karen Jones Date: 7/5/2024 2:14:00 AM Congratulations on your awesome poem receiving potd! Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 2:19:00 AM Thank you!

Clive Culverhouse Date: 7/5/2024 1:20:00 AM Mysterious and haunting, every now and then something truly special comes along, for me this is a gem, I love this Srveer! Extremely well earned poem of the day! Login to Reply Clive Culverhouse Date: 7/5/2024 1:23:00 AM You're welcome, I just made it a fave Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 1:21:00 AM Thank you!

Constance La France Date: 7/5/2024 1:14:00 AM Srveer, so deep and pondering, congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 1:16:00 AM Thank you!

Hilda Greenhough Date: 7/5/2024 1:03:00 AM Congratulations on POTD. Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 1:17:00 AM Thanks!

Christina Bowring Date: 7/5/2024 12:58:00 AM Many congratulations Srveer for POTD with this very deep, thoughtful poem. I love the use of the lake as a metaphor and knowing thyself in its reflections. A very well written poem of which I really enjoyed. Thank you for sharing and also, welcome to PS! Blessings to you :) Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 1:17:00 AM Thank you!

Beryl Edmonds Date: 7/5/2024 12:54:00 AM Congratulations Srverr on your first poem on the site receiving the honour of poem of the day. A warm welcome to PoetrySoup… Beryl Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/5/2024 1:18:00 AM Thank you!

Peonieslore xo Date: 7/3/2024 3:34:00 PM this poem appears to be entwined with symbolic themes of in-depth self-awareness and discovery. imagery of the lake and introspective tone evoke a journey of understanding one's own soul... and possibly others? even so, amazing. a fav Login to Reply Srveer Bhati Date: 7/3/2024 3:45:00 PM Thank you for your kind words. You inferred the composition with excellence. Have a good day.