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The Kiss

Your succulent lips Ripen like delicious peach Reach'd for mine tonight And under the bright moonlight You gave me eagerly a kiss.

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/7/2015 11:05:00 AM

So sensual Tanka " succulent lips " wow. Love sweet D. God bless>>>rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/7/2015 9:29:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Rajat, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, my dear friend! You're always so sweet and kind to me. Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Cynthia Jones

Date: 1/15/2015 9:12:00 AM

This Tanka is beautifully penned Dorian. I enjoyed the read. Thank you. *S* Cynthia

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/15/2015 11:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Cynthia! Much appreciated dear friend . :) Love and hugs! xxx D ^O^

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2009 5:01:00 PM

Love it. Sara

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/7/2015 9:27:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Sara, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 7/21/2009 10:30:00 PM

What a sweet portray of a KISS. Congratulations. Ernilando

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/7/2015 9:26:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Ernilando, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 7/20/2009 4:06:00 PM

Congrats on being featured, nice, passionate write....Aleera

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/7/2015 9:26:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Aleera, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/20/2009 7:10:00 AM

this is a wonderful write, you are such an intelligent poet, VERY ROMANTIC... lovely piece. please keep writing friend and congrats on your awesome piece bieng featured this week. Adeleke

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/7/2015 9:25:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Adeleke , for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

James Peranteau

Date: 7/20/2009 6:05:00 AM

Dorian,..great poem here my friend !! Congratulations on it being featured this week !! james

Oluwaseun Ogunbiyi

Date: 7/20/2009 2:55:00 AM

Very plain like fried eggs with no sauce or pepper. You simply told us the truth, what exactly happened. No flattery, nothing.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/7/2015 9:24:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Oluwaseun , for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

James Fraser

Date: 7/19/2009 2:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your feature this week Dorian>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2009 2:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dorian. Love, Carol

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/7/2015 9:22:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Carol , for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.