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The Key

The Key Brick walls of graffiti’d writings contour to these surroundings, blemished by permanent stains of worry fueled fears Shapes form and dissolve in mortar line crisscrosses, horizontal and vertical deceptions leading to destructive maneuvers As I lurk in the darkness between shadows and dead end signs, watching your every move from the corners of my mind’s suspicions Locked tightly as distrust has taken me prisoner with guilt as my guard throwing away the key to my sanity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/9/2017 3:35:00 AM
Love will always be there to hand back that key, take solace in the fact. Brilliant write dear Chris....... Maria
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Chris Green
Date: 6/12/2017 8:36:00 AM
Thanks so very much Maria.
Date: 6/8/2017 12:04:00 AM
I like it how you can read it in different ways, metaphor or reality. For me this is sometimes a very frightening reality. But yes, guilt and distrust are very good prisons, both of them. Accepting oneself with good and bad sides is one step closer to the key. Deciding to trust people again is the other one.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/8/2017 8:08:00 AM
I am thrilled to find what you took from this my friend. Thanks so much for your visit.
Date: 6/7/2017 9:24:00 PM
suspicion and distrust, whether brought on by guilt or not, can drive a person crazy. Better hold onto the key ... deep write Chris !!
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Chris Green
Date: 6/8/2017 8:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Lenna for always being so kind to me.
Date: 6/7/2017 5:59:00 PM
guilt can drive people crazy, it can also protect you from yourself
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Chris Green
Date: 6/8/2017 8:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Frederic. I guess you are right on both accounts.
Date: 6/7/2017 5:03:00 PM
Metaphorically powerful, Chris. One can sense the strong emotions. I hope you have a copy of that key...light comes after darkness! Regards // paul
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Chris Green
Date: 6/7/2017 5:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul. I am glad you liked this.
Date: 6/7/2017 4:07:00 PM
A penning not of your usual style, and just as well written as any, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/7/2017 5:01:00 PM
Thanks so much Lin. I like to change it up every once in a while. I am glad you enjoyed this one.
Date: 6/7/2017 3:20:00 PM
This is an intense state of being written about Chris. Well done with a powerful impact !
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Chris Green
Date: 6/7/2017 3:38:00 PM
Thanks again my friend. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

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