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This poem was supposed to have some humour, It did not turn out as expected.

Last December, I had my birthday celebration, It was so much fun that I forgot to use my walking cane, At the end, all the leftover food must be dumped, Even cake and sweets must be parted with pain. Next morning, I must return the hall keys, I looked in the drawer where I put my keys, Looked inside and outside the car for any clue, There was no clue for the missing key. I called hall in charge, She said there is $1000 penalty for lost keys, I would go to other functions in night, And ask if anyone had the hall keys in sight. With the key lost, all the sweet memories were turning sour, I emailed all the participants if they had an extra key, No one replied, I was planning to get a loan to pay the fine, When I was ready to go out, I saw something under a standing lamp, Its brass base was like the color of key, The key was there, hoping someone would find it there.

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Date: 7/14/2023 8:56:00 AM
So sad all the worry you went through. The key made sure it appeared in your sight before you had to go to the last step. Hope you never have to go through a worrying spell.
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Date: 7/13/2023 8:01:00 PM
I feel this is a real story. Thank God, you found it. Paying such a huge penalty will be so depressing!
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Date: 7/13/2023 3:28:00 PM
Hello Jay, You were lucky to find the key. Enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene\
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Date: 7/13/2023 12:49:00 PM
My house gets very messy when I cant find something ,as I pull everything out looking for it. Liked your story Jay. Nice to have a happy ending. Well done.
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Date: 7/13/2023 11:12:00 AM
- Glad you found the key ... money saved, Jay ... a great poem :) - hugs
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