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The Juggler

blood on one hand pussy in the other world peace in the air target audience

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Jack Ellison

Date: 12/18/2017 10:02:00 AM

LOL You seem to have hit a nerve!!!!!! Jab on! xxx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/18/2017 10:06:00 AM

Now to hit an artery ;) <3

Pat Adams

Date: 12/17/2017 7:17:00 AM

You can say a lot with just a few words! Great write. Profound but yet a little naughty!! What's not to love??......pat

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/17/2017 8:36:00 AM

Yeah, he doth bring out the naughty in me ;) Cheers dears! xomo

Mick Talbot

Date: 12/14/2017 12:42:00 AM

many a pussy doth bite.. some do it to spite... I do declare... for tis only with a treat... tiny, little bits of meat... that they think they can eat... your hand... not planned my reply... free verse that's why... just one more thing to say... Maureen keep on writing that way!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/14/2017 6:51:00 AM

....that reminds me of a fabulous B... horror movie ...I'm not as suggestive as my subjects suggest... Will do my best! Cheers!

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/12/2017 7:53:00 AM

Wonderful my friend, but the cat needs a bowl of milk -not blood! Yet the sharpness and cleverness in your verses rings loudly my friend.. As well as the exceptional daring!!! A fav!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/12/2017 8:17:00 AM

Giggle, any cat I've known would probably go for the blood before the milk lol ;) Thank you my friend. The spectacle does bring out the daring in me. Much love! xomo <3

Silent One

Date: 12/10/2017 10:27:00 AM

I got it after a while lol..

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/9/2017 10:53:00 PM

Hard hitting and spunky poetry Maureen. I love it. A great write my friend!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2017 11:08:00 PM

You warm me :) thank you so much Susan! xomo!

Bernard Chan

Date: 12/9/2017 9:30:00 PM

Edgy, honest, eloquent. Always love the attitude in your writes :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/10/2017 8:40:00 AM

Indeed lol! Cheers :)

Bernard Chan
Date: 12/10/2017 4:02:00 AM

"He" certainly is a godsend for anyone with a pen and a finely honed sense of the absurd. As for your bony tuning fork, may it buzz long and clear :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2017 9:59:00 PM

Thank you Bernard I appreciate that so much :) My feminist bone has been buzzing like a tuning fork. Can you tell? To be honest I doubt I would use such language if "he" hadn't delivered the sound bite.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/9/2017 7:28:00 PM

LOL, I cut my finger this morning!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2017 7:31:00 PM

You make me giggle so :) <3

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/9/2017 1:52:00 PM

brilliant!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2017 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Ilene :) muchos hugs!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/9/2017 1:30:00 PM

Provocative!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2017 2:10:00 PM

A little more mo than usual ;) xo!

Mike Hauser

Date: 12/9/2017 12:51:00 PM

:0o

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2017 2:08:00 PM

;) words cannot describe, but they'll try!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/9/2017 12:17:00 PM

topsy-turvy world gone awry, maureen...feisty write!...huggs

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2017 2:08:00 PM

Feisty, I like that, too true ;p xomo!

Pipping Stars

Date: 12/9/2017 11:24:00 AM

was that suppose to be an intravenous poem injection ... is "pussy" a dirty word ... is that what made world peace ..."pussy" ...is that a oh 13 word ... "pussy" in your hand ...is something shake ing ...was that a button that just dropped ... moisture on their screen ..."target audience" "pussy" ... is that what you mean ... should there be three dots ... in that "pussy" could you tattoo three dots on that ... "pussy" ... can that "pussy" give me a laminate poetry site ban ... that "pussy can.

Pipping Stars
Date: 12/9/2017 1:44:00 PM

how clumsy are red wings ... surely you jest ... here let me take my "pussy"s back ... ha ha ... cough.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2017 11:46:00 AM

His word. Lol. Though I changed the order of my lines lest the poem's message be lost in menstruation.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/9/2017 10:45:00 AM

You nailed it w/this power pill poem, Maureen! Your worldview is not skewered, that's for sure. Powerful uppercut punch to the lower cranial ... sending lights out to the upper cranial. And the ref said: It's over, shaking his head. Real strong poetry. Love and smiles always.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2017 10:52:00 AM

So dangerous. We need a referee! Not that any whistle could possibly be heard. Thank you dear poet, a lovely day to you! xomo :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/9/2017 10:27:00 AM

I must admit...I'm amazed too...In just a few words my heart is sad and blue...All the best Maureen

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/9/2017 10:30:00 AM

It is truly dumbfounding. It hurts my brain. Cheers dear! xomo :)