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The Journey

Coming from the city when I first saw the desert, miles and miles into emptiness, while fearful of the mishap-- a blown tire or busted axle-- the isolation spoke to me, a strange familiarity reminded me of why I had just got up and left… I guess, I never felt full though growing up in a city of endless abundance—remained a hunger in me that a deluge of fine food and riotous entertainment could only temporarily ease, speed slowing in my mind to gnawing repetition… I have found that things are just things when in rapid motion-- and a heart needs time and space to first learn its own aloneness, before it can ever be truly filled by someone else or something of greater, far more satisfying value….

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Date: 6/2/2020 2:03:00 AM
We are always seeking, I hope you found the perfect spot!
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Date: 4/18/2020 1:23:00 PM
Last verse is a killer Joe. Excellent free verse, well done...
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/22/2020 9:09:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie; you made my day! Blessings my friend!
Date: 4/16/2020 6:16:00 PM
Hello Joe DiMino, as I read this poem each word I read spoke to me. It has a meaning to me that stands out with each word. thank you for creating this poem. It will be my fav, Enjoy your evening my friend. Be safe.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2020 1:18:00 PM
You are welcome Joe. Enjoy your day my friend. be safe.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/18/2020 11:25:00 AM
Very kind of you, Darlene. Thank you so much. So pleased you could intimately relate to this work. Blessings!
Date: 4/16/2020 2:37:00 PM
We seem to always be searching until we find where we truly belong. Some never do. Wonderful and thought provoking Joe. I wish you success on your journey. xxoo
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/18/2020 11:26:00 AM
Hi Connie--another seeker; I think we, as writers, all journey. It is the profound nature of writing. Blessings by friend!

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