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Junk - Jobless Jack

Jobless Jack, a real jerk, dances a jig, He juggles, smuggles jewels in backpacks, jawbreakers, jump ropes, jelly rolls and crack. ~~Jig be up, Jack'll jiggle in the brig.~~ Junk jingles and jangles, squeals like a pig jerked and jacked from joints on his pickup routes. Amid crates of jackets, jeans, and jump suits, Jobless Jack, a real jerk, dances a jig, Jack jimmied the Jaguar trunk of some prig; now Judge Judy’s searching Jack's jalopy. “Jumping Jehoshaphat, what’s this jersey?" ~~Jig be up, Jack'll jiggle in the brig.~~ Jobless Jack, a real jerk, dances a jig, her missing jersey was what the judge found. ~~Jig be up, Jack'll jiggle in the brig.~ written 1/31/2018 a villonet Sponsor Constance La France Contest Name ''J'' Contest, New or Old

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Constance La France

Date: 9/15/2021 6:50:00 AM

Reason, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/14/2018 6:19:00 PM

Maybe a little overdone, but all in fun. I appreciate you comment.

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/13/2018 9:08:00 PM

This alliteration is brilliant, Reason. Love it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/23/2018 2:25:00 PM

I'm sending this one to Jersey Jerry, the 'J-walker.' Kudos, gw

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 5/12/2018 7:20:00 PM

thanks, Gershon. Appreciate your time and energy.

Silent One

Date: 1/31/2018 12:52:00 PM

Great alliteration in your rhyme poem.. This flows really well and is a great read..

Silent One

Date: 1/31/2018 12:52:00 PM

p.s it is 2018 :)

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 1/31/2018 7:48:00 PM

2018? So it is; would hate to miss this whole next year. It holds much promise. Thanks, Silent One, for taking the time to comment and point out my typo. Have a great next write.