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I dwell behind a high stone wall not visible except in my soul, where a veil of misty haze fills the corridors of my mind, and my innermost thoughts are silently beautiful and full of weeping. Some days, I just want to be unseen, prowling and creeping inside my own head to ponder and contemplate- Oh, I am but a speck in the vast universe of time, I am like a fragment detached, floating drifting, swirling eternally in the deep blue sea of imagination. Glorious and painful is the aloneness of being invisible, hidden, withdrawn from life, just residing behind my stone wall- where I lift my invisible pen to write poems in invisible ink. _____________________________ February 16, 2017 Poetry/Acrostic/ The Invisible Girl Copyright Protected, ID 17-1006-704-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.

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Date: 3/27/2018 9:01:00 PM
Wonderful acrostic writing, Constance. It is so YOU!
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Date: 3/27/2018 5:42:00 AM
Good Morning Broken - This entry is one that must be read out loud with emphasis and meaning. I very much enjoyed the theme along with its quiet reflective tone and voice that makes wonderful poetry. You have also captured the emotive factor. May this day find you well.
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Date: 3/26/2018 9:08:00 AM
Well written BW, I think we all need our inner sanctuary at times. Tom
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2018 2:44:00 PM
Tom thank you for visiting my poem
Date: 3/25/2018 6:56:00 PM
..."where I lift my invisible pen to write poems in invisible ink." ... that touch the hearts and souls of those who read them.
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:43:00 PM
John, thank you, I like that line too
Date: 3/25/2018 5:17:00 PM
I see a wall lush with growth. No one delivers such beautiful elegant melancholy like you dear poetess. Beautiful ink. xomo <3
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:42:00 PM
Maureen, thank you for the nice comment

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