The Infinite Night

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Poetry/Dizain/The Infinite Night
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1585-182-11
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, October 11, 2023
For the International Contest, Night Bewitches
Sponsor, Shadow Hamilton, Judged 10/13/2023

Third Place

"I have loved the stars too much, to have fear of the night." Quote by _ Sarah Williams At sixteen- I ran into the twilight, the infinite night was shifting, whirling; as the sky grew into violet light. Darkness wrapped a veil around me swirling, the stars came sparkling, dancing and twirling. Shade upon shade getting deeper- stone cold, night a blanket- beautiful to behold; and he cradled me close in his embrace, as infinite stars above twinkled gold. Night- a serene, sweet lover with no face !

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Karen Jones

Date: 10/14/2023 6:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your 3rd place win!

Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2023 2:29:00 AM

Karen, thank you so much for the congratulations, appreciate.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/14/2023 5:45:00 AM

Congrts on placing 3rd Connie I really liked your poem Hugs Shadow

Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2023 2:29:00 AM

Shadow, thank you so much for the contest, congrats, and compliment, appreciate.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/13/2023 9:13:00 PM

Night a serene sweet lover with no face! Sigh this is so heartfelt and so brave of you to run into the twilight all alone and how you’ve described the feeling with imagery is beyond impeccable. Must have been challenging but you did it. You’ve made it. You are so strong warrior poetess

Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2023 2:30:00 AM

Ink, thank you so much for the lovely comment, and compliment, appreciate.

Jay Narain

Date: 10/12/2023 10:56:00 AM

Beautiful poem. Nice picture and quote.

Constance La France
Date: 10/12/2023 10:28:00 PM

Jay, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate.