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“I hate Mondays,” yes, I surely do, I say aloud while folding up that shirt which, with some other tops, I'm giving to the Goodwill store along with an old skirt. I think about last weekend and how fast it went. How wonderful it was to lie around the house! Too bad it never lasts. To work I go and hope the hours will fly. Weeks pass. The “I hate Monday” shirt now goes to Africa where jeans and shirts and shoes are given to the poor. Among the clothes, my shirt is one a little boy will choose. He walks a long way, then in dirt he works each day so he can eat. Nobody pays him money; he knows nothing about perks or weekends. With his friends he rarely plays. Beneath that shirt whose words he cannot read his tummy growls, while I , so far away across an ocean, grumble how I need a break, and how I hate to wake on Monday! Based on Picture #1 Written April 8,2016 for the Images that make you think Poetry Contest of S.O.

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Date: 4/27/2016 9:38:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your " Images that make you think WIN." Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:55:00 AM
It is true Andrea. This is happening in poor countries. Your presentation is nice....with love.
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Date: 4/23/2016 9:18:00 PM
I read this a few times and it grew on me like a favorite, well-worn house shirt -- soon to be deposited for ... Africa, perhaps?
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Date: 4/17/2016 7:44:00 AM
Great thoughtful wrote.
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Date: 4/15/2016 9:51:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this work again, congratulations Andrea!
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Date: 4/14/2016 10:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea...powerful write
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Date: 4/14/2016 9:44:00 PM
Thoughtful contrast made between our lives and theirs. Fine poem, Andrea. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/14/2016 6:13:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your placement in Silent One's contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/14/2016 5:55:00 PM
congrats Andrea and for the record I hate Mondays myself
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Date: 4/14/2016 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your placement in the contest. We do take so much for granted. Over half the world's population doesn't even have clean water to drink. Peace nice lady:)
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Date: 4/11/2016 1:54:00 PM
Nice write Andrea, makes one stop and ponder about the inequalities that exist just because of your place of birth. It should do well!
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Date: 4/10/2016 7:03:00 PM
We take for granted what foods will please us and how work is a drudge, but as expressed in your well conceived poem, when we stop to think of these blessed children, we should have no complaints at all. A wonderful entry for the contest Andrea. It is sure to be a top winner. # 7 :)
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Date: 4/10/2016 12:08:00 PM
I like the contrast and perspective SO's contest gives. I like what you did for this contest Andrea. You captured the perspective & expressed the contrast well with the connection between our worlds through one shirt.
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Date: 4/10/2016 11:40:00 AM
Sad thoughts, but everything in life is relative. Yes it is sad to think if that poor child, but his suffering doesn't make yours less real. Nice deep write.
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Date: 4/10/2016 9:25:00 AM
Love your personal touch to this soul stirring image:) all the best in the contest:)
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Date: 4/10/2016 4:11:00 AM
A morsel for one, may be a feast for another. I so appreciate the powerful message, and genuine feel of this piece. I looked forward to reading your take on this picture, and what you penned is outstanding!
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Date: 4/9/2016 10:47:00 PM
It really is a humbling photo, Andrea ... makes you pause and consider how big life's problems really are. Your words hit a home-run with how many thoughts can arise, from nothing more than a T-shirt, and a silly saying. P.S. I have a feeling that Silent may have already halted any further incoming entries (that's what I do when my contests are full) ... if my poem gets an N/A I'll be okay with it ... I'm happy with it either way.
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Date: 4/9/2016 5:50:00 PM
Your problems seem small compared to the boy's problems. Weekends go fast don't they! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/9/2016 5:50:00 PM
a gem of a piece, andie... dovetailing monday's meassge on a shirt with african children who needs clothing and food is really superb!.. huggs
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Date: 4/9/2016 5:40:00 PM
This is such an amazing take on the picture, and I hope it does really well in the contest, dear Andrea!! :) :)
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Date: 4/9/2016 3:10:00 PM
Very creative and poignant Andrea
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Date: 4/9/2016 2:45:00 PM
Wow! I enjoyed this gem. I wish you all the best within.........A.M.
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Date: 4/9/2016 1:23:00 PM
I find this heart-grabbing.Oh dear Andrea...Yes we do have all the luxuries others in third world countries lack , don't we...and yes I nag too for having too much work on my hands..many times forgetting how lucky I am..and how blessed. An excellent post... I bet this will score high.
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Date: 4/9/2016 1:09:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Way to go..We have no problems compared to what happens in other countries..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/9/2016 11:57:00 AM
Andrea, a wonderful entry for the contest... good luck :)-luloo
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