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The I Hate Mondays Shirt

“I hate Mondays,” yes, I surely do,
I say aloud while folding up that shirt
which, with some other tops, I'm giving to
the Goodwill store along with an old skirt.

I think about last weekend and how fast
it went. How wonderful it was to lie
around the house!  Too bad it never lasts.
To work I go and hope the hours will fly.

Weeks pass. The “I hate Monday” shirt now goes
to Africa where jeans and shirts and shoes
are given to the poor.  Among the clothes,
my shirt is one a little boy will choose.

He walks a long way, then in dirt he works
each day so he can eat. Nobody pays
him money; he knows nothing about perks
or weekends. With his friends he rarely plays.

Beneath that shirt whose words he cannot read
his tummy growls, while I , so far away
across an ocean, grumble how I need
a break, and how I hate to wake on Monday!



Based on Picture #1
Written April 8,2016 for the Images that make you think Poetry Contest of S.O.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your " Images that make you think WIN." Always ~LINDA~
Dalei Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:55 AM
It is true Andrea. This is happening in poor countries. Your presentation is nice....with love.
Arnone Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 9:18 PM
I read this a few times and it grew on me like a favorite, well-worn house shirt -- soon to be deposited for ... Africa, perhaps?
Walker Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 7:44 AM
Great thoughtful wrote.
Williams Gault Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 9:51 AM
I enjoyed reading this work again, congratulations Andrea!
May Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 10:40 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea...powerful write
Leiser Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 9:44 PM
Thoughtful contrast made between our lives and theirs. Fine poem, Andrea. Congrats on your win!
Haight Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 6:13 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your placement in Silent One's contest. Hugs, Sandra
Davey Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 5:55 PM
congrats Andrea and for the record I hate Mondays myself
Turner Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your placement in the contest. We do take so much for granted. Over half the world's population doesn't even have clean water to drink. Peace nice lady:)
Hamilton Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Nice write Andrea, makes one stop and ponder about the inequalities that exist just because of your place of birth. It should do well!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 7:03 PM
We take for granted what foods will please us and how work is a drudge, but as expressed in your well conceived poem, when we stop to think of these blessed children, we should have no complaints at all. A wonderful entry for the contest Andrea. It is sure to be a top winner. # 7 :)
Carmack Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 12:08 PM
I like the contrast and perspective SO's contest gives. I like what you did for this contest Andrea. You captured the perspective & expressed the contrast well with the connection between our worlds through one shirt.
Inman Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Sad thoughts, but everything in life is relative. Yes it is sad to think if that poor child, but his suffering doesn't make yours less real. Nice deep write.
Daniel Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Love your personal touch to this soul stirring image:) all the best in the contest:)
Williams Gault Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 4:11 AM
A morsel for one, may be a feast for another. I so appreciate the powerful message, and genuine feel of this piece. I looked forward to reading your take on this picture, and what you penned is outstanding!
Hicks Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 10:47 PM
It really is a humbling photo, Andrea ... makes you pause and consider how big life's problems really are. Your words hit a home-run with how many thoughts can arise, from nothing more than a T-shirt, and a silly saying. P.S. I have a feeling that Silent may have already halted any further incoming entries (that's what I do when my contests are full) ... if my poem gets an N/A I'll be okay with it ... I'm happy with it either way.
Onclaud Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 5:50 PM
a gem of a piece, andie... dovetailing monday's meassge on a shirt with african children who needs clothing and food is really superb!.. huggs
Anish Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 5:50 PM
Your problems seem small compared to the boy's problems. Weekends go fast don't they! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Rv Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 5:40 PM
This is such an amazing take on the picture, and I hope it does really well in the contest, dear Andrea!! :) :)
Mohn Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 3:10 PM
Very creative and poignant Andrea
Muideen Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 2:45 PM
Wow! I enjoyed this gem. I wish you all the best within.........A.M.
Chircop Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 1:23 PM
I find this heart-grabbing.Oh dear Andrea...Yes we do have all the luxuries others in third world countries lack , don't we...and yes I nag too for having too much work on my hands..many times forgetting how lucky I am..and how blessed. An excellent post... I bet this will score high.
Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Reads like a winner..Way to go..We have no problems compared to what happens in other countries..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
Scars Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Andrea, a wonderful entry for the contest... good luck :)-luloo
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