The Hush

The morning is brittle.
It was like this when I awoke
and saw a thin coating of ice
glazing the ground. Beneath,
there is a fragile silence.
If I speak, something
will shatter into pieces.

Even my breath seems 
to set a tremble upon the still,
one foot on its step
will break it apart.
Nothing else moves except
for the vapors slowly rising up
on the first rays of sunlight.

I will wait in this sacred hush
until what is here 
withdraws into itself 
and gently falls asleep.
There will be a morning
when I will know its name
and it will greet me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lawrence Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 6:02 AM
So mysteriously beautiful and haunting dear Paul . Beckoning visuals and detailed moments of time with anticipation. Loved it ! Susan :)
Willason Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 8:31 PM
Thankyou Susan for entering the space....pleased that you found the poem a worthwhile read and to receive your kind words. Always encouraging to get such feedback.....Paul
Parker Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Quite an evocative piece. So well paced and ending in a place we all want to go.
Willason Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 8:22 PM
Many thanks Arlo for reading the poem and taking the time to comment. Pleased that it, in some way, spoke to you...appreciate yr kind words.
Lawless Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 10:07 AM
That opening line.....just magnificent...calling to the reader to tread lightly
Willason Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 8:18 PM
Ah! .noticed. Always taught that you need to grab attention in the first two lines. A challenge though. I think Auden was a master at this, poor mortal as I am can but try. As always, your comments are valued my friend.
Lane Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 8:05 AM
There is a certain sanctity to be found in silence. The hush of morning that we should not disturb with a sound of our own. It's best to honor those peaceful moments, searching for our own. Accolades to you, Paul.
Willason Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 8:11 PM
Feel the same Lin...important, at least for me, to cultivate that sense of reverence for the natural order and the mystery that dwells just beneath it. The noise of life often overwhelms us and we cannot hear that other voice. Thanks for yr comments Lin....appreciated.
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