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The Hurting Tree

Once there was a grand forest Full of life and beauty Till a logging company Decided it was their duty ...to cut it down Tree after tree disappeared Leaving the rest to retreat in fear As they moved to the center Only the bark was needed to make Products of convience That promised to take ...the process of pain Humans are horrible creatures With entitled features Leaving One tree to stand alone Stripped naked of its bark Products and People Devalued the tree and left the mark ...of pleasure killing pain Vulnerable, raw to touch The only use left, a wooden crutch ...for a wounded soldier. Written by Trudy Schrader Note: In my counseling class, we watched a video of an addicted man who was clearly in denial. He was defensive, and not in a place to admit he had a problem. I actually prayed, "God please don't send me a client like that." Another student, who was moved to compassion said, "Do you see him? It's his identity. He can not be vulnerable. He must be strong! How horrible...no place to rest." I repented of my uncaring prayer.

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Date: 2/8/2018 11:12:00 AM
i sort of agree with this caper....still, i am quite fond of paper....and yes, we are killing the Earth....still do you know whats worse....it is perhaps mankind's greatest fault....how can the flesh return to the Earth from a casket vault....truly destroying the true cycle of Life....and we wonder why we experience so much strife....nice job here trudy....;)
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Trudy Schrader
Date: 2/8/2018 12:22:00 PM
I love nature, but this is an allegory based in the truth, "hurting people, hurt people." The reason they hurt people is because the thing they were terrified of, vulnerability, is the only thing they are left with, and it defines them. I know, because I was that tree...sarcasm was my weapon of choice, and I could deliver the arrow with a grand sense of humor.

Book: Shattered Sighs