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The House On the Hill

. One house that dots the distant hill, where a curve in the river runs now shivers, alone, in the winter's chill. It sits near a star, now that day is done, I notice a light, as the twilight comes. I wonder who sits there, behind the light? From the window, there is soft, yellow glow… Who sits at a table, alone tonight? Is it someone whose spirits are low? Is it someone I'm destined to know? Armed by tall pines, on either flank, As soldiers would guard a fort Near the river that runs with the willowed banks, Would they welcome a friend at their door? For we have been neighbors for years… +++++++++++++++++++++++ "English Quintain" By Carrie Richards 12/10/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/7/2012 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Debbie Guzzi 's "Change for the Meter" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:09:00 AM
Carrie,Congrats on your win.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/6/2012 1:33:00 AM
nice win, thank you, Al
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Date: 2/6/2012 1:02:00 AM
You sure got me wondering here with you, Carrie! I sure can imagine that house on the hill! Super congrats on your beautiful write :D hugs to you! :D
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Date: 2/5/2012 6:00:00 PM
Maybe sometime I will see my sonnet? ;) A wonderfully expressive write as we have come to expect from you!Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/5/2012 2:58:00 PM
Enjoyed the thought process here Carrie, and congratulations on the win..!
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Date: 2/5/2012 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on another win, Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:44:00 AM
carrie congrats on your win..David
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Date: 2/5/2012 8:44:00 AM
This one just kind of pulled me along Carrie. Made me want to see where you were going. Well done and congrats
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Date: 1/15/2012 7:18:00 PM
Ahhhh it wants to be a sonnet [it told me]and it wants YOU to tidy up its meter LOL..love you...
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Date: 12/22/2011 6:07:00 PM
this is one of my favorites great poem keep them comming
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Date: 12/14/2011 2:51:00 PM
I like the eerie feel to this Carrie, but it also has beauty and mystery. Ones mind could go wandering thinking out scenarios reading your words. Good luck in Francine's contest. I now wish you a most lovely festive season, and I hope Santa is good to you all :) hugs xx
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Date: 12/12/2011 4:49:00 PM
you are an amazing writer, and i love the way you express yourself in this incredible poem, and also i would like to repeat the words that some have said before me you really do create a mood and an image in my mind
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Date: 12/12/2011 6:55:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this great composition...Reads like a winner..Soup mail..Sara
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Date: 12/11/2011 5:38:00 AM
a museful reverie and you brought us along with you in it. very nice Carrie. I guess too it's like Greg said here.. you create a mood. I enjoyed it
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Date: 12/10/2011 9:20:00 PM
Carrie, Very nice, you create such a mood and mystery in you poem. I enjoy reading your poetry very much.
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Date: 12/10/2011 8:46:00 PM
I feel more serenity in this piece, Carrie..not so much lonliness..just serenity and quiet . Love it. Best wishes for Francine's contest...This is beautiful. Love, Annalise
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