The House On the Hill

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One house that dots the distant hill,
where a curve in the river runs
now shivers, alone, in the winter's chill.
It sits near a star, now that day is done,
I notice a light, as the twilight comes.

I wonder who sits there, behind the light?
From the window, there is soft, yellow glow…
Who sits at a table, alone tonight?
Is it someone whose spirits are low?
Is it someone I'm destined to know?

Armed by tall pines, on either flank,
As soldiers would guard a fort
Near the river that runs with the willowed banks,
Would they welcome a friend at their door?
For we have been neighbors for years…

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 "English Quintain"

By Carrie Richards 12/10/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Debbie Guzzi 's "Change for the Meter" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 8:09 AM
Carrie,Congrats on your win.Enjoyed the read.
Williams Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 1:33 AM
nice win, thank you, Al
K. Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 1:02 AM
You sure got me wondering here with you, Carrie! I sure can imagine that house on the hill! Super congrats on your beautiful write :D hugs to you! :D
Guzzi Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 6:00 PM
Maybe sometime I will see my sonnet? ;) A wonderfully expressive write as we have come to expect from you!Congrad's Light & Love
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February 5, 2012 at 2:58 PM
Enjoyed the thought process here Carrie, and congratulations on the win..!
Johnson Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations on another win, Carrie. Love, Joyce
Williams Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 10:44 AM
carrie congrats on your win..David
Quigley Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 8:44 AM
This one just kind of pulled me along Carrie. Made me want to see where you were going. Well done and congrats
Guzzi Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 7:18 PM
Ahhhh it wants to be a sonnet [it told me]and it wants YOU to tidy up its meter LOL..love you...
Walker Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 6:07 PM
this is one of my favorites great poem keep them comming
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December 14, 2011 at 2:51 PM
I like the eerie feel to this Carrie, but it also has beauty and mystery. Ones mind could go wandering thinking out scenarios reading your words. Good luck in Francine's contest. I now wish you a most lovely festive season, and I hope Santa is good to you all :) hugs xx
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December 12, 2011 at 4:49 PM
you are an amazing writer, and i love the way you express yourself in this incredible poem, and also i would like to repeat the words that some have said before me you really do create a mood and an image in my mind
Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 6:55 AM
Good luck in the contest with this great composition...Reads like a winner..Soup mail..Sara
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December 11, 2011 at 5:38 AM
a museful reverie and you brought us along with you in it. very nice Carrie. I guess too it's like Greg said here.. you create a mood. I enjoyed it
Stanley Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 9:20 PM
Carrie, Very nice, you create such a mood and mystery in you poem. I enjoy reading your poetry very much.
Haick Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 8:46 PM
I feel more serenity in this piece, Carrie..not so much lonliness..just serenity and quiet . Love it. Best wishes for Francine's contest...This is beautiful. Love, Annalise
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