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The Hour of Painted Skies

Late one afternoon the sizzling sun became a descending illusion
when the diffusion of his fiery fingers were immersed in the sea
I pleaded with my wistful melancholy mood not to claim control
of my sullen soul at the hour of painted skies; birth of gloaming

But roaming went my somber soul in a most unpredictable place
It saw my face in a mirror, searching for pathos. I yearned to feel
something real but couldn't, until frosted veils fell from my eyes
and I realized with crystal clarity; I hadn't been listening to my heart

I needed to start being a person who would not live entangled in lies,
who cries in remorse for the wrongs I'd done when my eyes were blind 
I had to be the kind of loyal friend who would never turn my back
on others, nor lack the courage to be valiant, and my faith restore

Forevermore, could I be forgiven for every sin I had ever committed?
When pitted against temptation, I vowed not to give in to the dark
A spark now glows in my heart. Is this the emotion called compassion?
If sympathy were a garment of fashion, I would wear it as my hallmark
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Daniel Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 8:49 AM
A great poem written from the heart, Lin:)
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 9:16 AM
Jo, your comments to me are always sincere and I appreciate you for that. Thank you so very much.
Bauer Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 1:42 PM
wow, you have risen to the challenge quite remarkably, lin! amazing...
Lane Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Hellloooo Ilene, and many thanks for your terrific compliments.
Smith Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 11:21 AM
Excellent Lin...a fantastic introspection and great imagery
Lane Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Thank you on both counts, Tim.
Cozart Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 10:19 AM
Good write, Lin!
Lane Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Thanks a heap, Dale.
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