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The Horror of Nine-Eleven

Life had been normal Then a crash the whole world heard Pain in many hearts Revenge was instigated Then the world knew our power Russell Sivey Entrant into Carolyn Devonshire’s “Remembering 9/11” contest

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/15/2011 5:36:00 PM

Congrats my friend on a wonderful win.. always Michael

Jack Horne

Date: 9/15/2011 4:01:00 PM

Many congratulations to you, Russell : )

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/15/2011 10:42:00 AM

Very well written Russell. Congratulations on your win

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/15/2011 4:20:00 AM

My favorite line "Life had been normal" is also a favorite memory from before...Congratulations on your 4th Place win my friend. CR

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/15/2011 12:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Interesting take on 9/11.. Well done. Lee

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/15/2011 12:17:00 AM

memorable song, russell..sunniest congrats on your special win :) huggs

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/14/2011 8:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Russell! Kim

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/14/2011 8:17:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of Carolyn, Russell

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/14/2011 4:06:00 PM

Congrats Russell on your wonderful win .. with wonderful lines of expression luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/14/2011 3:18:00 PM

A long time coming... but finally. Well done and congratulations. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 9/14/2011 3:01:00 PM

Russell, Congratulations on a worthy presentation. Revenge is the motive of volence, mostly. Agape, Moses

David Williams

Date: 9/14/2011 2:56:00 PM

Russell congrats on your win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/14/2011 2:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Russell. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/14/2011 1:59:00 PM

Russell, I like the way you describe the impact of this event on the entire world. Indeed, pain was felt in many hearts across the globe. Pres. Bush initiated plans for revenge immediately and I think he will be remembered most for this, even though it took nearly 10 years to find and punish the perpetrator bin Laden. Congratulations on your win! There were many great entries, so take pride in your achievement. Love, Carolyn

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/13/2011 12:09:00 AM

Still fresh in my mind too, we won't ever forget what happened. tributes like yours help to heal.

Don Johnson

Date: 9/12/2011 6:38:00 PM

the horror shock felt round the world, jumbo jets from the sky were hurled, hatred is the season, for no apparent reason, with it i regret...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2011 6:34:00 PM

Reads like a winning work to me..Enjoyed reading this one..Good luck..Thanks for the kind review of my work...Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/12/2011 6:26:00 PM

Yesterday's anniversary, stirred up a wealth of fresh emotions....it almost seemed like it had happened just yesterday. Good luck to you, Russell !

Constance La France

Date: 9/12/2011 5:02:00 PM

A great entry for the contest, Russell, best of luck, and I want to thank you so much, for my win in your mazingHaiku contest, I am so proud and Russell, notice my new user name, it is explained in my blog.. love~~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2011 12:16:00 PM

a stirring write, russell.. the power of your words shines!.. winning's best..:) huggs, nette