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A previously posted poem, one of my firsts. Reposted for the Halloween season.
She comes when the Moon is heavy With wishes from many a maid Who with passionate longing, Their dreams upon it laid She comes when night is warmest In the time of the southern winds That bring the moaning cries Of maidens who meet sad ends Her long dark tresses flowing Along a figure fair and sweet In creamy lace of night dresses She haunts there and hopes to meet Her lover, ever vacant, ever empty, never there Alone she walks this road and mourns This pain too much t’bare Theirs was a true love story Begun in the naïveté of youth They were to meet and marry But then a mad rival twisted truth The Man* said her lover was taken A wife and children he had at home For you see this blue Deceiver Had a love for her of his own With trust born of the young She believed his sordid tale But when she refused his offer His jealous rage upon her fell And alas the gallant lover! Comes riding in, but he's too late For his dark haired beauty Had already met her fate Then the *Man in the Moon whispered, “Young lad, Bring the lass to me… For I have many wishes... One just for you, maybe” The lover looked up in confusion but how can this be so? Moon-Man*, You are so high and we are so very low. Across the sea he noticed just then his answer there The moon was reflected in grandeur On black waters bright and fair So into the cold sea he went With his love in his strong arms Toward the ever deceitful Moon He walked to meet the dawn. My story truly happened thus Of that I can attest For I'm the vengeful maiden Haunting the Moon from death

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Date: 10/11/2024 7:55:00 AM
Heart -chilled, fascinating poem touched my heart. Emotive urge and passionate romance is nicely expressed. Blessings
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/19/2024 7:31:00 AM
Thank you Anisha! I think that is always our hope when we write.. to touch someone, make them feel something. I'm so glad you let me know how my poem accomplished this! What a rewarding comment! Xo
Date: 10/8/2024 3:18:00 PM
A fascinating read Crystol, enjoyed… Beryl
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/10/2024 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Beryl! Xo
Date: 10/7/2024 2:55:00 PM
wow I love your chilling poem, I hope I can emulate it !
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/8/2024 10:31:00 AM
Thanks so much! You just do you Rose, cause Rose has many fans! Xo
Date: 10/7/2024 8:51:00 AM
Dear Crystol, Let me first say that I am glad you reposted it for it was well worth reading. I loved how you blended elements of Gothic romance, folklore, and celestial mythology, weaving together themes of young love, betrayal, and the enduring nature of a spirit wronged. Perfect for a Halloween Month! - Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/7/2024 12:13:00 PM
Tysm Daniel! I'm honored you enjoyed it! Xo
Date: 10/6/2024 1:29:00 PM
Halloween aside, this is a well told tale, Crystol. Enjoyed it :) It gave me an idea for your contest .... Mmmm
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/7/2024 1:50:00 AM
I'm intrigued now! Ty for stopping by! Xo
Date: 10/6/2024 1:09:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your write/story. I do not do Halloween... Have a blessed week writing away...................
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/7/2024 1:49:00 AM
Thank you! You as well! Xo
Date: 10/6/2024 12:31:00 PM
Very well told. That moon is a trickster especially at Halloween. ??
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/7/2024 1:49:00 AM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 10/6/2024 10:17:00 AM
I must admit im not a big fan of Halloween or other commercialised days.. but your poem is dark and the use of words creates this imagery so well..
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/6/2024 12:08:00 PM
Oh thank you so much! I'm honored to have you read and comment on my writing! I definitely understand your distaste for the commercialism of holidays. As for me, I enjoy dressing up and giving candy to the little ones. I like the way the communities come together during events like that. Appreciate you Silent One! Xoxo
Date: 10/6/2024 10:16:00 AM
Wow Crys quite dark and well told. I don't have anything to do with Halloween but I enjoy a well written tale
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/6/2024 12:04:00 PM
It's controversial in the Christian community for sure...we each have to decide for ourselves how our conscience/ Spirit leads in things like that and respect others choices. Sometimes it's just a matter of spiritual growth as we all grow at different rates and in different ways. Anyway I appreciate the encouragement as always my friend! Xoxo
Date: 10/6/2024 9:35:00 AM
A tale well told; poetry alive. :o))
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/6/2024 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Arlo! Xo

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